Theme
Eric just left the flower shop, he had a box of chocolate in one hand and flowers in the other. It was Valentine's day and he wanted to give his girlfriend a nice present. He arrived a her work (coffee shop) and gave her the presents. She was so grateful, she gave Eric a big hug and thanked him.
What the theme?
Romance
soccer is the best sport, you should try it!
What is wrong with this statement?
no evidence
A dog is the best type of pet to have because they are loyal to their owners. Dogs also protect there owners from any threats and danger. Dogs can also play with there owners which most people enjoy. Having a dog can be cooler if you teach them tricks.
what is the main idea?
a dog is the best type of pet to have
The color purple is a very outstanding color. Purple is different from the others with its different types of shades. Grapes is also the color purple, which other fruits might not have as a color. purple also blends in with the sunset sky which is beautiful.
What is wrong with this introduction?
capatizillation, not 5 sentences.
libraries have helped a lot since it was made, and people need to know that. Libraries have improved by helping people get smarter and prepares them for school. library's also provide entertainment to people with certain topics. Libraries give you book and service, you cant get online. Libraries are very important.
what is wrong with this conclusion?
ending needs more explanation
The knight was on an epic quest. He was on his way to slay the dragon and be the hero of his kingdom. He made his ay to the entrance of the dragon's cave and spotted a sign, it read" Out hunting, Come Back Later To Attempt To Slay Me XD". The knight was shocked at what he had seen, he found a near by rock at sat and waited.
What is the theme?
Adventure, Humor
Florida is the best place to visit in the summer, because of its warm weather, and amusement parks.
What is wrong with this statement?
nothing is wrong with this
Water is a very great drink to have during hot days but besides that its very healthy. Water is very healthy towards your body because our body is made out of 60%. Water is also very good for you when your dehydrated or thirsty and healthy.
what is the main idea?
water is the healthiest type of drink
Many people enjoy this common food called pizza. something unique about this food is that its shaped like a circle as a whole but each piece is a triangle. What people enjoy about this food is it comes in many flavors you can choose from. Pizza is also made from unique ingredients such as tomato sauce and cheese, and dough. There is more reasons to love this unique food but this is the key details about liking pizza.
what is wrong with this introduction?
didnt explain too much
To summarize, Pizza is a food that everyone loves today. Pizza is known for its unique shaping, as a whole its a circle, but when you cut it, its triangle. There are many different toppings for pizza, each one crazier then the other. Pizza is one of the most loved foods today.
what is wrong with this conclusion?
not 5 sentences
Little Tommy got home from school and started to set up him video games,his mother walked in to the room and told him she was going to the store and wanted him to do the dishes. Little Tommy really wanted to play video games and he decided to play games instead of doing the dishes. 30 minutes passed and Tommy was still playing games until he heard the door open, it was his mom and she was really disappointed in him for not doing the dishes she trusted him and he promised to do them. Tommy got grounded,he also felt bad for not doing the dishes.
What is the theme?
Do What Your Told, or you will have consequences
A dog is the best type of pet to have because they like to play around with there owners.
What is wrong with this statement?
only has one reason
Florida is a state that is part of the united states and has a great amount of populations because it grabs peoples attention. Florida has many interesting things such as amusement parks such as disneyworld and universal orlando. Florida also has a great weather when it comes to summer, it includes very warm weather which is great for going to the beach.
what is the main idea?
Florida is the best place to visit in the summer
Libraries are really important for our community. Libarys also help shape adults and kids mind. libraries also have many interesting topics to read from.
what is wrong with this introduction?
not enough evidence, and spelling, and not 5 sentences.
To conclude, strawberries are one of the fruits people enjoy today. They have a bright red color which made them them stand out. Roses also have a very beautiful red color too. They are also known for their sweet flavor. Strawberries are one of the most enjoyed fruit.
what is wrong with this conclusion?
gets of topic
Lion was always mean to Mouse but Mouse didn't care what he thought. One day, Lion got trapped by hunters and was in a net hanging from a tree, Lion cried for help. Soon Mouse heard Lion's cries and made his way over. Lion spotted Mouse and pleaded for his help, Mouse use his big teeth that Lion use to make fun of to chew through the net and get Lion free. After they were a safe distance away from the hunters, Lion asked Mouse of why he saved him, ouse said "even though you were rude, you don't deserve to die". From that day on Lion was never rude to anyone again.
What is the theme of the paragraph?
Friendship, Helping others can help change peoples opinions.
Christmas is the best holiday of the year according to most people. Christmas includes having family over and receiving presents.
what is wrong with this thesis statement?
2 sentences
Going somewhere? well traveling is a big thing around the world but many people have their own ways
airplane is the best way to travel in
Strawberries are one of many fruits people enjoy eating. Especially its juicy red color which makes it stand out. Roses are one of the most prettiest flowers in the world. Strawberries also have a sweet flavor. Strawberries are something to enjoy and are delicious in every way.
whats wrong with this introduction?
gets of task, not enough explanation
In conclusion, dogs are good pets to have. They are super cute and there are so many breeds of dogs. Training your dog would help its behavior and help your dog listen. They are loyal company if you care and love them. Having a dog can also help you learn responsibility from them.
what is wrong with this conclusion?
nothing
The deer was eat in a field, soon she saw something coming at her she then saw the wolf and sprinted in the other direction. The wolf was hot on her trail, but she was still ahead.She made sharp turns and made jumps as a attempts to get away fro the wolf. Soon she came to a big raveen, wolf was now infront of her, she then jumped onto the other side and made it and ran as fast as she could then when she knew he was gone she then rested.
What is the theme of this story?
Survival, Good vs Evil
Airplane is the best way to travel because its faster and more comfortable.
What is wrong with this statement?
Nothing
Every year there is Holidays people like celebrating. One of the Holidays is Christmas which most people celebrate. On Christmas you get to gather around with family and celebrate. People also receive presents on this holiday. Many agree this is the best holiday of the year.
Christmas is the best holiday of the year or trying to prove it
Dogs make such good pets with most people, which makes people want to own them. Besides that they are really adorable, and they are so many to choose from and many different colors and varieties. Training your dog is also important it can make them behave bad or make them not listen to you. Treating your dog with lots of love means you will receive love from them to. Having a dog is a big responsibility but are great pets if you treat them right.
what is wrong with this introduction?
nothing is wrong
Purple is a very beautiful color. Purple is a very unique color with its different shades. Purple is the color of some of our foods. The sky also turns purple which is gorgeous. Having purple is better than most of us think.
what is wrong with this conclusion?
needs to be explained more