my friend sarah likes to play soccer.
My friend Sarah likes to play soccer.
When Emma spoke to Claire, she was upset.
Emma was upset when she spoke to Claire.
Where are you going
Where are you going?
I ate a sandwhich for lunch.
Sandwhich -> Sandwich
i went to the libary
I went to the library.
we went to kelowna during the summer.
We went to Kelowna during the summer.
Although I studied all night, I was prepared for the test.
Because I studied all night, I was prepared for the test.
I need three things a pencil a ruler and a notebook
I need three things: a pencil, a ruler, and a notebook.
The weather was beautifull yesterday.
Beautifull -> Beautiful
my freind loves pizza but he dont like cheese
My friend loves pizza, but he doesn't like cheese.
on monday, we studied canadian history.
On Monday, we studied Canadian history.
I baked the cake in the oven for 30 minutes and preheated the oven to 350 degrees.
I preheated the oven to 350 degrees and then baked the cake for 30 minutes.
My favourite activities are swimming running and dancing
My favourite activities are swimming, running, and dancing.
I definately recieved your message.
Definately -> Definintely;
Recieved -> Received
last saterday me and my sister went to the park and it was fun
Last Saturday, my sister and I went to the park. It was fun.
last friday, mr. thompson took our class to okanagan lake.
Last Friday, Mr. Thompson took our class to Okanagan Lake.
Because of the raining, I used my umbrella.
Because it was raining, I used my umbrella.
I forgot my homework said Jack.
"I forgot my homework," said Jack.
The computer is over their.
Their -> There
yesterday our class visit the okanagan museum we learn about local history
Yesterday, our class visited the Okanagan Museum. We learned about local history.
in october, my brother and i visited vancouver, british columbia, to watch a hockey game.
In October, my brother and I visited Vancouver, British Columbia, to watch a hockey game.
This morning I ate breakfast and I ate pancakes, put on my outfit for the day and woke up at 7:30.
This morning, I woke up at 7:30, ate pancakes for breakfast, and then put on my outfit for the day.
Before we left the house we packed snacks water sunscreen and towels
Before we left the house, we packed snacks, water, sunscreen, and towels.
The principal gave us an oportunity to participate in the scool's acheivement ceremony.
Oportunity -> Opportunity
Scool -> School
Acheivement -> Achievement
on friday our teacher ms wilson gave us an important assignment we had to research an endangered animal i chose the grizzly bear because they are becoming less common in some areas
On Friday, our teacher, Ms. Wilson, gave us an important assignment. We had to research an endangered animal. I chose the grizzly bear because they're becoming less common in some areas.