She don’t like broccoli
“Don’t” should be “doesn’t.” She doesn’t like broccoli.
I like cats they are soft.
Run-on. I like cats. They are soft.
I want to by a new toy.
“By” should be “buy.” I want to buy a new toy.
Although it was late, we kept working on the project.
Nothing is wrong! This sentence is correct.
Where is my backpack
It’s a question, so it needs a question mark. Where is my backpack?
The dogs runs to the park.
"Runs” should be “run.” The dogs run to the park.
It was raining we stayed inside.
Run-on. It was raining, so we stayed inside.
Their is a spider on the wall.
“Their” should be “There.” There is a spider on the wall.
We went to phoenix last summer.
“Phoenix” is a city, so it needs a capital P. We went to Phoenix last summer.
I cant find my shoes.
“Cant” needs an apostrophe. I can’t find my shoes.
Me and Tom went to the store.
“Me and Tom” should be “Tom and I.” Tom and I went to the store.
My brother plays soccer he scored two goals today.
Run-on. My brother plays soccer. He scored two goals today.
I ate to many cookies.
“To” should be “too.” I ate too many cookies.
My birthday is in july.
Months get capitals. My birthday is in July.
I have a cat a dog and a fish.
A list needs commas. I have a cat, a dog, and a fish.
Yesterday I eat pizza for lunch.
“Eat” should be “ate” because it already happened. Yesterday I ate pizza for lunch.
We went to the zoo, we saw a lion.
Run-on (a comma isn’t enough to join two sentences). We went to the zoo, and we saw a lion.
The wind blue my hat away.
“Blue” should be “blew.” The wind blew my hat away.
My teacher, mrs. Lopez, is nice.
Capitalization. “Mrs.” needs a capital M. My teacher, Mrs. Lopez, is nice.
The dogs bone is under the couch.
The bone belongs to the dog, so it needs an apostrophe. The dog’s bone is under the couch.
There is three cookies on the plate.
“Is” should be “are” because there’s more than one cookie. There are three cookies on the plate.
The bell rang everyone ran outside they were excited for recess.
Run-on with three sentences smushed together. The bell rang. Everyone ran outside. They were excited for recess.
Your going to love this book.
“Your” should be “You’re” (you are). You’re going to love this book.
There are going to go to the store.
There should be They're
Mom said Clean your room.
Needs a comma and quotation marks. Mom said, “Clean your room.”