Grammar
Students doing all work alone.
✅ Students are doing all the work alone. / Students do all the work alone.
Study in group is effective.
✅ Studying in a group is effective.
People need to communicate with people.
✅ People need to communicate with others.
✅ People need human connection.
In nowadays, many people struggle with globalization.
✅ Nowadays, many people struggle with globalization.
Student learning groups' positive effect.
✅ Group learning has a positive effect on students.
Everyone have different thing.
✅ Everyone has different things.
They want improve their theoretical knowledge.
✅ They want to improve their theoretical knowledge.
Students take harms from each subject.
✅ Students struggle with some subjects.
✅ Some subjects are difficult for students.
Work in group or individually have benefits.
✅ Working in a group or individually has benefits.
Many domestic brands produce their products.
✅ Many local brands produce and sell their own products. / Domestic companies manufacture their own goods.
If students work together for complete their tasks, they can learn better.
✅ If students work together to complete their tasks, they can learn better.
Firstly, being concentrate is one of the most important parts of students' life.
✅ Being concentrated / Concentration is one of the most important parts of students' lives.
Students use effort to find friends.
✅ Students make an effort to make friends.
✅ Finding friends takes effort.
Communication is essential part of people life.
✅ Communication is an essential part of people's lives.
Students share their own departments.
✅ Students from different departments share their knowledge with each other.
Students may be achieve their responsibilities easier individually.
✅ Students may achieve their responsibilities more easily individually.
If students work in a group, education can more effectively.
✅ Education can be more effective. / Students can learn more effectively.
They give back concentration easily for class.
✅ They can easily refocus
✅ They can easily regain their concentration in class.
As a result of conclusion, big companies has a more impact to our lives.
✅ In conclusion, big companies have a greater impact on our lives.
One of the key factor this topic is globalization.
✅ One of the key factors in this topic is globalization.
Who students discuss for project can try to improve communication skills.
✅ Students who discuss projects can try to improve their communication skills.
This problem makes doesn't effective education.
✅ This problem makes education ineffective. / This problem has a negative effect on education.
If you are not fit with the topic, teacher explains.
✅ If students don't understand the topic, the teacher explains it.
Some student maybe can shy and can't communicate with friends.
✅ Some students may be shy and unable to communicate with their friends.
This is bad effects for people's mental health.
✅ This has negative effects on people's mental health.