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Is this a good example of a paraphrase?
Original
“For some reason, cheese-topped donuts are quite popular in Indonesia, and in September 2013 KFC decided to get in on the action, offering a glazed donut topped with shredded Swiss and cheddar cheese.”
Paraphrase
Cheese-topped donuts are popular in Indonesia. In September 2013, KFC decided to offer a glazed donut topped with shredded Swiss and cheddar cheese (“Over the top international fast-food items”).
No, this is not a good paraphrase!
The student has simply removed some words, and copied the rest of the sentence. Also, the citation is missing a date.