Details + Data
Are there enough details/data in this sentence?
Our group allocated the work into two parts: Siri designed the slides, and I built this jeopardy.
Is this sentence specific enough?
I had slept for only 3 hours this morning, causing me to think that having this sentence as a question is a good idea.
Yes
Are there enough details/data in this sentence?
Our recent marketing initiative generated a solid increase in website traffic over the past few weeks.
No
Is this sentence specific enough?
Vanguard has partnered with Temple to open several internship positions exclusively to Temple students.
Yes
How can you add more details/data to this sentence?
Our new marketing campaign performed really well.
How can this sentence be more specific?
Workers' benefits hikes up labor costs greatly.
b