1. Revise
What is the correct way to write the two sentences?
Ella suggested we go to the library. An stop at the store along the way.
A. Ella suggested we go to the library, we stopped at the store along the way.
B. Ella suggested we go to the library and stop at the store along the way.
C. Ella suggesting we go to the library and stop at the store along the way.
D. Correct as written.
B. Ella suggested we go to the library and stop at the store along the way.
Which change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
"I'm going to read my book" said Josie, as she lay down on her bed.
A. Add a period after book.
B. Change said to Said
C. Add a comma after book
D. No change is needed
C. Add a comma after book
What is the best transition word to add to the beginning of the sentence 3?
(1)My aunt promised us ice cream after school. (2)When the school bell rang, we ran outside as fast as we could. (3)We all jumped into my aunt's big red truck.
A. After
B. When
C. Because
D. Immediately
D. Immediately
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
Benjamin said he knew his brothers had made a peanut butter and jelly sandwich for theirselves.
A. Change knew to new
B. Change made to makingC. Change theirselves to themselves
What is the correct way to write the two sentences?
Andrew wanting to win the trophy. He practiced every night.
A. Andrew wanted to win the trophy, so he practiced every night.
B. Andrew wanted to win the trophy, then he practiced every night.
C. Andrew wanting to win the trophy, because he practiced every night.
D. No revision needed.
A. Andrew wanted to win the trophy, so he practiced every night.
What is the correct way to write the two sentences?
Quickly I jumped up. I tried to grab my books, but they fell out of my hands.
A. Quickly I jumped up, I tried to grab my books, but they fell out of my hands.
B. Quickly I jumped up, and tried to grab my books, but they fell out of my hands.
Quickly I jumped up, and tried to grab my books. But falling out of my hands.
D. The sentences are correct.
A. Quickly I jumped up, I tried to grab my books, but they fell out of my hands.
Which change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
The headlights on the truck showing that we were on a long, winding road.
A. Change showing to showed
B. Change that to something
C. Change were to was
D. Make no change
A. Change showing to showed
What is the BEST way to combine the two sentences?
It became too wet to play football. It was raining outside.
A. It became wet outside because it was too rainy and playing football.
B. It became too wet to play football, because it was raining outside.
C. It became too wet to play football because it was raining outside.
D. The two sentences are correct.
B. It became too wet to play football, because it was raining outside.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
"I love my new shoes," Alex said as he looked at him in the mirror.
A. Change him to himself
B. Delete the comma
C. Change the comma to a period
D. The sentence is correct
A. Change him to himself
How should the sentence be changed?
Emma's teacher said it is important to study Greek and Latin root's.
A. Change Emma's to Emmas'B. Change Greek and Latin to greek and latin
C. Change root's to roots
D. The sentence is correct
C. Change root's to roots
What is the correct way to write the two sentences?
Harmful chemicals run off in the fields. Can weaken the eggs of falcons.
A. Harmful chemicals run off in the fields can weaken the eggs of falcons.B. Harmful chemicals weaken the eggs of falcons and can run off in the fields.
C. Harmful chemicals run off in the fields and can weaken the eggs or falcons.
D. The two sentences are correct.
C. Harmful chemicals run off in the fields and can weaken the eggs or falcons.
Which change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
To help my sister pick up her toys, I dropped down on my hands and knees.
A. Change help to helping
B. Change hands and knees to hand's and knee's
C. Change dropped to droped
D. No change is needed
D. No change is needed
What is the best way to revise the following sentence?
I am going to pass the STAAR and I am going to make my teacher proud.
A. I am going to pass the STAAR make my teacher proud.
B. I am going to pass the STAAR, and make my teacher proud.
C. I am going to pass the STAAR and make my teacher proud.
D. The sentence is written correctly.
C. I am going to pass the STAAR and make my teacher proud.
What change, if any, should be made?
My mom told me that it's going to be a wonderful day!
A. Change mom to Mom
B. Change going to gonna
C. Change it's to its
D. No change is needed
C. Change it's to its
What change, if any, should be made?
Of all the paintings in the gallery, Emily liked the one by the female artist better.
A. Change better to best
B. Change female to femail
C. Delete the comma
D. The sentence is correct
A. Change better to best
What is the correct way to revise the two sentences?
Almost eight gallons of water were lost. Every day from Mr. Steele's leaky faucet.
A. Almost eight gallons every day of water were lost from Mr. Steele's leaky faucet.
B. Almost eight gallons of water were lost every day from Mr. Steele's leaky faucet.
C. From Mr. Steele's leaky faucet almost eight gallons every day of water were lost.
D. The sentences are correct.
B. Almost eight gallons of water were lost every day from Mr. Steele's leaky faucet.
Which change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
I was hungry as a bear, and ready to eat Grandma's apple pie.
A. Delete the comma
B. Change and to I was
C. Change hungry to hungery
D. The sentence is correct.
A. Delete the comma
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What change, if any, should be made?
This is an important part of out saturday outing.
A. Change important to more important
B. Change an to a
C. Change saturday to Saturday
D. Make no change
C. Change saturday to Saturday
What is the best way to revise this sentence?
The Statue of Liberty, given to America, was a birthday gift.
A. The Statue of Liberty was a birthday gift, given to America.
B. The Statue of Liberty was given to America, and was given as a birthday gift.
C. The Statue of Liberty was given to America as a birthday gift.
D. No revision is needed.
C. The Statue of Liberty was given to America as a birthday gift.
What is the correct way to revise the two sentences?
Jeremy had basketball practice. Jeremy also having homework.
A. Jeremy has basketball practice, but he also had homework.B. Jeremy had basketball practice, Jeremy also had homework to do.
C. Jeremy had basketball practice, because Jeremy also had homework to do.
D. The two sentences are correct.
A. Jeremy has basketball practice, but he also had homework.
Which change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
I took some yummy soup to my Grandmother, who was not feeling well.
A. Change took to tooken
B. Change soup to soop
C. Change Grandmother to grandmother
D. The sentence is correct as written.
C. Change Grandmother to grandmother
What is the correct way to revise the sentence?
If people would pick up trash after they use the park, it would always be clean.
A. Picking up trash by many people using the park would always be clean.
B. The park would always be clean by people picked up trash after they use the park.
C. The park would always be clean, if less trash was picked up by people.
D. The sentence is correct.
C. The park would always be clean, if less trash was picked up by people.
What change, if any, should be made?
Maggies dress was the most beautiful dress at the dance.
A. Change most beautiful to more beautiful
B. Change Maggies to Maggie's
C. Change dance to danse
D. No change is needed
B. Change Maggies to Maggie's
What is the best subordinate conjunction, that could be added to the beginning of this sentence?
I was walking to the store, I saw a puppy.
A. Before
B. While
C. Since
D. Although
B. While