Subordinate Clauses
I thought I had on black pants, when I went to work.
I thought I had on black pants when I went to work.
or
When I went to work, I thought I had on black pants.
I ran into a familiar face and realized, that was my pediatrician.
I ran into a familiar face and realized that was my pediatrician.
Peering over the top of his classmates head Eric realized he forgot to write the notes for today’s class.
Peering over the top of his classmates heads, Eric realized he forgot to write the notes for today’s class.
My brother a very good football player, that scores three touchdowns
My brother, a very good football player, scores three touchdowns.
The team won the basketball game by 7 points although all the players did not play.
The team won the basketball game by 7 points, but all the players did not play.
She quietly walked past her mother’s room who was sleeping softly.
She quietly walked past her mother’s room, who was sleeping softly.
Eric peering over the top of his classmates heads, realized he forgot to write the notes for today’s class.
Eric, peering over the top of his classmates heads, realized he forgot to write the notes for today’s class.
Suzie’s uncle, Mark, owns a red Benz.
Suzie’s uncle Mark owns a red Benz.
Unless you have a lot of money steer clear from Lenox Square Mall .
Unless you have a lot of money, steer clear from Lenox Square Mall .
When my mother served me dinner, I wasn’t hungry, or thirsty, so I went to my room.
When my mother served me dinner, I wasn’t hungry or thirsty, so I went to my room.
Kelly is a preschool teacher, who finds it difficult to control her class.
Kelly is a preschool teacher, who finds it difficult to control her class.
No Change
Eric realized he forgot to write the notes for today’s class peering over the top of his classmates heads.
Eric realized he forgot to write the notes for today’s class, peering over the top of his classmates heads.
Aaron Rodgers the Packers quarterback, was recognized as most valuable player during back to back seasons.
Aaron Rodgers, the Packers quarterback, was recognized as most valuable player during back to back seasons.
After, the English class, started most of the students arrived late.
After the English class started, most of the students arrived late.
My Visa card had not been mailed, yet it was pointless to go to the new luxury mall.
My Visa card had not been mailed, so it was pointless to go to the new luxury mall.
Stanley our deceased dog loved, to play, catch when he was alive.
Stanley, our deceased dog, loved to play catch when he was alive.
Because teens still face choices of whether to conform to social stereotypes or be themselves many novels and excerpts surrounding self esteem will continuously stay relevant today.
Because teens still face choices of whether to conform to social stereotypes or be themselves, many novels and excerpts surrounding self esteem will continuously stay relevant today.
Studying theater throughout his high school career Alonzo, decided he wanted to act for Broadway.
Studying theater throughout his high school career, Alonzo decided he wanted to act for Broadway.
According to Better Homes and Gardens, John Jones the award winning gardener is very experienced at his profession.
According to Better Homes and Gardens, John Jones, the award winning gardener, is very experienced at his profession.