Revising and Editing Questions
Revising and Editing Questions 2
Revising and Editing Questions 3
Essay or Short Answer
Essay or Short Answer

100
What correction should be made to this sentence? Last summer my family went to visit Aunt Hilda in alaska.
Alaska is the name of a state-capitalize it!
100
What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? The beekeepers was happy to have all our bees.
Should be... The beekeepers were happy to have all our bees.
100
What correction should be made to this sentence? Alaska is rich in forests wildlife, and minerals.
Comma in a series! Alaska is rich in forests, wildlife, and minerals.
100

The space before you write a new paragraph

What is indent?

100

True or False: You can rough draft your essay on notebook paper before typing it?

TRUE

200
What correction should be made to this sentence? Gertrude Ederle was a great american swimmer.
American is a nationality-capitalize it!
200
What correction should be made in this sentence? She had watched skiers perform during the 2010 winter olympics at Whistler Mountain.
Change 2010 winter olympics to 2010 Winter Olympics...It's a name of an event, so capitalize it!
200
What change should be made? I like to read stories aloud, Sam said to his mother.
You need quotation marks around the words that Sam says! "I like to read stories aloud," Sam said to his mother.
200

The sentence is called _________ to grab the reader's attention and it is in __________ paragraph?

What is hook and introduction? 

200

What does should be in OH, 123, 123 C prewriting?

What is Opinion, Hook, 3 reasons with 3 examples and evidence for each and 1 cited source for each?

300
What change, if any, should be made to this sentence? The silk shoots out through tiny tubes in the spiders body.
spiders should be written....spider's showing possession.
300
What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Travis Tran is known for finding ways to waist time in class.
Change waist to waste.
300
What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!
This is a question! How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees?
300

What type of transition word do you write for your FIRST body paragraph?

What is Beginning transition word?

300

True or False: You use RACE or RACES for short answer response questions?

TRUE

400
What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? On saturday the beekeepers came to our house.
Saturday is the name of a day of week. It should be capitalized!
400

What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? He took all the bees away in two boxs.

boxs should be written boxes.

400

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Man first landed on the moon on July 29 1969.

Add a comma after 29.

400

This sentence answers the writing prompt, tells the reader what you think, and is in _____________ paragraph first.

What is thesis statement/opinion and introduction?

400

You include this to support your reasons.

What is evidence and explanation?

500
What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Maya picked peppers watermelons and lettuce to plant in the garden.
Comma in a series...Maya picked peppers, watermelons, and lettuce to plant in the garden.
500
What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? I woked up and did not remember where I was.
Change woked to woke.
500
What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? Mrs.Worling sounded fearfull, but Talon wasn't.
Change fearfull to fearful.
500

Your essay should be at least _______________ paragraphs long? When you are done typing your essay you should __________ and _______ before you turn it in?

5 paragraphs

Revise and edit  

500

What is the elements of an introduction?

What are:

Hook, state the argument, opinion, and 3 reasons

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