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We went out to dinner and then we saw a movie.
We went out to dinner, and then we saw a movie.
Joseph bought milk cookies and bread at the store.
Joseph bought milk, cookies, and bread at the store.
Yes I would like some more potatoes.
Yes, I would like some more potatoes.
Laney thank you for putting your toys away.
Laney, thank you for putting your toys away.
Is this correct?
However can I get something to eat?
No.
However, can I get somethinhg to eat?
Jackson wants to play baseball but Elijah wants to play basketball.
Jackson wants to play baseball, but Elijah wants to play basketball.
Ashley Travis Trenton and Kelsey are going to a birthday party on Saturday.
Ashley, Travis, Trenton, and Kelsey are going to a birthday party on Saturday.
No my homework is not finished yet.
No, my homework is not finished yet.
Do you want to play tag with us today Jonah?
Do you want to play tag with us today, Jonah?
Is this correct?
Suzie and Maria, have a seat please.
Yes.
I was cold outside at the picnic so I put on my jacket.
I was cold outside at the picnic, so I put on my jacket.
We went canoeing hiking and skiing on our trip to the lake.
We went canoeing, hiking, and skiing on our trip to the lake.
Well I guess we can play a board game even though it’s raining outside.
Well, I guess we can play a board game even though it’s raining outside.
Boys and girls please have a seat.
Boys and girls, please have a seat.
Is this correct?
Emanuel wanted to go to the movies but Imanuel wanted to stay home.
No.
Emanuel wanted to go to the movies, but Imanuel wanted to stay home.
The baby was tired yet he didn’t want to take a nap.
The baby was tired, yet he didn’t want to take a nap.
Visiting museums trying new restaurants and sleeping late are her favorite things to do on vacation.
Visiting museums, trying new restaurants, and sleeping late are her favorite things to do on vacation.
However she does like chicken tacos.
However, she does like chicken tacos.
Thank you for your applause ladies and gentlemen.
Thank you for your applause, ladies and gentlemen.
Is this correct?
Suzie, I wanetd to ask you to take your test.
Yes.
I like to eat tamales but my brother hates them.
I like to eat tamales, but my brother hates them.
I could not decide if I should get the shrimp steak chicken potatoes or pork for dinner.
I could not decide if I should get the shrimp, steak, chicken, potatoes, or pork for dinner.
However, I was so upset with my siblings when I got home.
Students I have something that I need to say.
Students, I have something that I need to say.
Rewrite this correctly.
When I grow up I want to join the circus and travel around the world, but my mom says I should be a doctor.
When I grow up, I want to join the circus and travel around the world, but my mom says I should be a doctor.