Pronouns/Verbs
The combination of skills--shooting, dribbling, and passing--make Stephen Curry one of the greatest shooters in the NBA.
MAKES
Getting enough sleep is important for anyone to maintain a healthy lifestyle, however, the latest study by Harvard shows that lack of sleep is not necessarily correlated to high risk of heart disease.
--/:/;/. HOWEVER
The hairstyle of the president of Taiwan is more stylish than the former mayor of Taipei.
...than THAT of the former mayor of Taipei.
In the beginning of our morning practice, when everyone was still tired and no one could make a successful shot from the 3-point line.
...practice, everyone...
She likes to eat pizza _____ hates burgers.
BUT (no comma)
Most recently known for their performance in Euphoria, Zendaya, along with co-stars Sydney Sweeney and Hunter Schafer, are recognized as Hollywood's young stars today.
HER......IS......YOUNG STAR
After a long discussion with her fellow researchers, Michigan professor Rick Ross, decided to continue her study throughout the spring semester.
RICK ROSS DECIDED
Clothes worn by teenagers in the 1990s were much more colorful than the teenagers now.
...than THOSE worn by the teenagers now.
Following the grade drop, the director being concerning with the class's performance on the test last week.
..., the director WAS CONCERNED...
The new vaccines are endorsed by several well-known medical professionals __________ even my grandparents--who are uncertain about the side effects--decided to register.
; THEREFORE,
In front of the garage still stands a vase and few small statues I can't bring into my new apartment.
STAND
The new discovery has a profound impact: on implementing agricultural practices and maintaining day-to-day barn operations
NO COLON (has a profound impact on something)
The chef made the most delicious waffles for his wife and kids, all of them enjoyed the night.
*(Can only change the second part of the sentence)
all of WHOM
He is hired many high-profile clients, Jerry Mcguire, one of the biggest sports agent in New England.
HIRED by many......, Jerry Mcguire IS one of...
Since the beginning of 2009, there has been a growing awareness of the emission of greenhouse gases and their harmful effects on the environment. ________, people have paid more and more attention to how carbon dioxide, methane, nitrous oxide, and ozone have negatively impacted our habitat.
(=)
THAT IS / IN OTHER WORDS / SIMILARLY / THAT BEING SAID
The London Coliseum is an impressive establishment that dated back to 1904 and each of the entrances were guarded by soldiers.
DATES back... IS guarded by soldiers.
Every team must consider each of these elements: before facing the Lakers. Defensive strategies for instance can significantly limit the shooters' performance.
NO COLON & ", for instance,"
I enjoy driving my Volkswagen T-ROC, where GPS system is not only convenient but also an essential part of the car.
...T-ROC, WHOSE GPS system......but also essential.
The new contract negotiation was completed, that the players all began to celebrate because there would soon be a 40% raise in salary cap.
WHEN the new contract..., THE PLAYERS ALL...
______ their rigorous practice schedule and game day preparation, most of the football players cannot spend the holidays, ______ Christmas and New Year, with their families.
DUE TO/BECAUSE OF......SUCH AS/INCLUDING
Having a long history of artistic and intellectual legacy shaped by contemporary musicians--almost every prolific composer during the time, including Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart and Ludwig van Beethoven, were superior to his peers--Vienna have been commonly regarded as the city of classical music.
WAS SUPERIOR......Vienna HAS BEEN
Like princess' wardrobe, the childs' playhouses is rarely organized despite their parents--whom I've worked with on several occasions in my former company's--constantly reminding them to clean. Nevertheless, toys are always scattered all over the floor.
Like A PRINCESS'(S) wardrobe, the CHILDREN'S playhouses ARE......in my former COMPANIES
Approaching 70, Teddy often wandered around and got lost in the city, and every time we found him it was either at a rundown factory or the streets.
...or ON the streets.
Before practices of martial arts were first introduced to the American public by none other than Bruce Lee in the 60s, but a time period the Hippie Movement was also at its height.
PRACTICES of martial arts......60s, a time period WHEN/IN WHICH/WHERE the Hippie Movement......
Once the hacker successfully breaks into the system, the files should be very accessible because they are not hidden any further. _________, we need him to submit a copy to the following address.
NEXT/SUBSEQUENTLY