figurtiv language
I was so tired I felt like I was going to collapse
hyperbole
Don't be late, Bill warned.
"Don't be late," Bill warned.
It was a cold night I could hear the trees wising in the wind.
setting
his heart bated very fast
Absloutsts
simile
And then he said mind your own business
and then he,
"Get down here this instant and finish your homework," said jennies' mom.
dialogue
the rain pelted all the trees beneath it and hung over the homes.
Vivid verbs
i have eyes in the back of my head
Idiom
how dare you she said angerly
"How dare you," she said angrily .
And BOOM the lose car hit the tree.
action
The house was very normal squar and pointie
adjectives out of order
i could here the rain drops plop plop plop plop plop plop plop plop
onimonapia
"It is a one-story house with a big kitchen. said the realtor.
"It a one-story house with a big kitchen," said the realter.
I could hear the rain. pouring down so hard i could feel it
setting
her pales were sweeting she know she was going on the biggest zip line in north America.
abslouts
the trees are waving in the rushing wind
metaphor
after the band sang they said good night and left
After the band sang, they said good night and left.
action
Shelby and I went to the store to buy some chips.
Appositives