Vocabulary
In this case the advantages dominated the advantages.
[OUTWEIGHED / WERE MORE THAN]
Living in a small village creates a peaceful and long life, where there are less pressure.
[IS]
People will often help each other without hesitate and this makes me happy.
[HESITATION]
Another think is about access to technology and information.
[THING]
Additional, when we live in a small village it is healthier because the air is fresher.
[ADDITIONALLY]
For example, if someone buy a new television, everyone will know it.
[BUYS]
Actually there are a lot of advantages & disadvantages living in small villages.
[OF]
Actually there are a lot of advantages & disadvantages living in small vilages.
[VILLAGES]
In my village, someone didn’t have more money to send their child to university.
[ENOUGH]
Sometimes, lived with many people can make it so we don’t have any privacy.
[LIVING]
Firstly, we can easier to ask for help.
[MORE EASILY ASK FOR HELP]
Thirthly, by living in a small village, we will have a lower cost of living.
I think many of the disadvantages were not having privacy, misinformation and toxic communities.
[THE MAIN DISADVANTAGES]
Living in a small village helps us know how to built a good relationship with others.
[BUILD]
Firstly, the people easier to spread gossip.
[IT WAS/IS EASIER FOR PEOPLE TO…]
I belive there are more benefits than what people had in the past.
[BELIEVE]
The chieftain of the village asked people to make a charity. (2 errors)
[CHIEF; DONATION]
The biggest problem was that his parents wouldn’t work hard because they feel everyone will always help them by giving them money. [2 errors]
[FELT, WOULD]
Another thing is that there is less technology and infrastructure outside of city.
[THE CITY]
Furthermore, living in a small village helps us create a peacefull life and compite for job opportunities. [2 errors]
[PEACEFUL; COMPETE]