Paraphrase this Prompt
Many people travel abroad during their holidays
A lot of people go to other countries for vacation
What are the main parts of a problem–solution essay?
Introduction
Problem paragraph
Solution paragraph
Conclusion
Name two linking words that show contrast between ideas
However, On the other hand, Yet
Tourism can have both positive and negative effects on the places people visit
Visitors may impact areas in helpful or harmful ways
What should you include in the introduction of a problem–solution essay? Name two things
A paraphrased version of the task/question
An outline sentence mentioning one problem and one solution
hoose the best linking words to complete the paragraph:
Tourism supports the economy in many countries. __________, it can lead to overcrowding in popular places. __________, governments are trying to promote eco-tourism
however / as a result
Uncontrolled tourism may lead to serious damage to the environment and local communities
1. If tourism is not managed properly, it can seriously harm nature and the people who live there.
or
2. Without regulation, tourism can negatively affect both ecosystems and residents.
A student has written the following introduction. Read it carefully. What are 3 structural or logical problems with it in the context of a problem–solution essay?
“Tourism is increasing all over the world. People want to see different countries and enjoy their time. This essay will describe some interesting places to visit and explain why people love traveling.”
Wrong focus for essay type – The essay sounds like it will describe tourist attractions and reasons to travel, which is more suitable for a descriptive or opinion essay. It doesn’t match the problem–solution task type.
No paraphrase of the question/task – The introduction doesn’t mention any issues or challenges caused by tourism, so it fails to paraphrase the prompt meaningfully.
Missing outline of structure – There is no mention of a problem or solution to be discussed. A good problem–solution introduction needs to clearly show what the essay will focus on.
The sentence below uses linking words incorrectly or awkwardly. Rewrite it correctly using appropriate linking words:
Tourism is growing, because it also damages the environment, so people are worried
Tourism is growing; however, it also damages the environment, so many people are concerned.
Although tourism is growing, it also harms the environment, which worries many people.
Tourism is growing. As a result, it affects the environment, and people are starting to worry