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I reccomend buying a lip balm from a drug store.
reccomend --> recommend
Its not a genetic thing.
Its --> It's (it is)
Hello Alex:
Hello Alex,
I am sorry to hear that you have black heads.
not an issue mentioned in the writing topic
Another thing is to not listen to bullies.
to not listen --> not to listen
Be confident of how you look, because that's just how you look.
, because --> because
Yours truly, // Best regards, // Regards,
Chris Wong
Love, // Best, // Yours, // Best wishes,
Chris Wong
To help your dark circles, get 8 hours of sleep a a day. This helps you get enough energy to stay focused in lessons and study well.
elaboration is not related to dark circles.
To cure your chapped lips, apply lip balm when it feels dry.
it feels --> they feel
Here are my advices.
--> Here is my advice
Dear Alex,
Hey Alex! I am sorry to hear that...
Dear Alex,
I am sorry to hear that...
I recommend the brand "Yummy Lips" that will solve your chapped lips in no time.
sounds like an ad! talk about the qualities, not only the brand
I suggest drinking at least 8 cups of water everyday.
everyday --> every day
I recommend you to drink more water.
I recommend drinking more water.//
I recommend that you drink more water.
By Chris Wong
Best, Chris Wong
I understand that you feel bad, but you shouldn't feel this way. ... your classmates talked about your appearance, but that's how your appearance is.
????? where is the empathy??????
First off, your chapped lips.
First off, regarding your chapped lips, I 'd suggest...
You could also try washing your hair more often if it is still oily.
could --> can
They don't understand how it feels to be in your shoes.
Firstly, I saw that you have chapped lips.
Transition is too sudden.
e.g.
They don't understand how it feels to deal with issues like chapped lips, dark circles, and oily hair, but I will help you out!
Firstly, let's work on your chapped lips!