True or False:
The Key word "Revision" means we will be working with CUPS type questions.
False
True or False:
When we see the key word "edit" or "corrections" we are expecting to see CUPS questions.
True
The first paragraph of an essay is usually called the_____?
Introduction
I need to go to the store for groceries.
sentence
What is a homophone?
A word that sounds the same as another, but it has a different meaning and is spelled different.
True or False:
When we Revise, we revise with ARMS
True
What does the C stand for in CUPS?
Capitalization
What do we call the two sentences included in an introduction.
(hint) the first sentence is called the? (gets the readers attention)
the last sentence is called the? (tells reader what essay will be about)
Hook
Central idea statement
fragment
Two complete sentences that run together is called ______.
Run on
What does the A stand for in ARMS?
Add- details, descriptions, sentences
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Yay. I finally got the car I have been wanting!
A. Change been to ben
B. Change I to i
C. Change the period to an exclamation point
D. No change.
C. Change period to exclamation point
Will you pick up that towel, please?
Sentence
How do we fix a run-on sentence?
with a comma and the right conjunctions
Create two sentences
What Revision needs to be made in this sentence?
My parents are so nice that I am afraid to ask them to sleep over at my friends.
A. change friends to friend's
B. change nice to strict
C. Change the period to a question mark
D. No change
B. Change nice to strict
When someone speaks, we call that dialogue. When we see a dialogue, what punctuation is needed before the dialogue and after the dialogue?
Quotation marks
To help us explain our body paragraph, we need to use _______ to enhance our writing.
detail, transition words,
6 W's plus 1
Going to the game tomorrow.
fragment
What is one type of hook to use for your essay?
Question
Action
Onomatopoeia
What does ARMS stand for?
Add
Remove
Move
Substitue
What does CUPS stand for?
Capitalization, Usage, Punctuation, Spellling
What are the elements of an essay?
Introduction:
Hook, CIS
Body Paragraph:
Topic Sentence
Explanations
Transition sentence
Conclusion:
Central idea statement restated
A complete sentence must have a _____ and a _____.
Subject and predicate.
Combine these two sentences:
He is playing a video game. He is on the toughest level.
A. He is playing a video game, so he is on the toughest level.
B. He is playing a video game, and he is on the toughest level.
C. He is playing a video game, but he is on the toughest level.
D. He is playing a video game and he is on the toughest level.
B. He is playing a video game, and he is on the toughest level.