AAAWWUBBIS
Synonyms
Revising
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Grammar Concepts
100

The in AAAWWUBBIS stands for:

If

100

What is a synonym for the word inference?

Prediction

100

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 14 to avoid repeating an idea?

(14) The bus driver instructed and told Colvin to move farther back.

The bus driver instructed Colvin to move farther back.

100

What change needs to be made?

(2) They are very unhappy with the British government's approach to taxing the colonies.

Change are to were

100

We use ____ to combine 2 ideas, things, or items.

And

200

When a sentence starts with an AAAWWUBBIS word, what do we need to add halfway through the sentence?

A comma

200

What is another word for glanced?

Looked

200

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 24?

(24) Colvin filed a lawsuit and with some other women.

Colvin and some other women filed a lawsuit.

200

What change needs to be made?

(5) The tea was worth $1,700,00 in todays' money.

Change todays' to today's

200

We use these two things to combine two or more sentences.

, and

300

The in AAAWWUBBIS stands for:

Until

300

What is a synonym for paraphrase?

Summary/summarize

300

Sentence 32 needs to be revised. Write this sentence in a clear and effective way.

(32) She listened and then a hug for me.

She listened and then gave me a hug.

300

What change needs to be made?

(6) After three hours of dumping tea into the water the colonists fled into the night.

Insert a comma after water

300

We use ____ to show two things that didn't happen.

Neither/nor

400

The 3 A's in AAAWWUBBIS stand for:

After, Although, As

400

Write a synonym for bumfuzzled.

Confused

400

Combine the sentences in a clear and effective way.

(17) They are certain areas on the sun's surface. (18) These areas are slightly cooler.

They are certain areas on the sun's surface, and they are slightly hotter. 

They are certain areas on the sun's surface that are slightly hotter.

400

What change, if any, needs to be made?

(2) They were headed for the harbor, where three ships were sitting.

No change is needed!

400

We use these two things to show two or more sentences that present choices.

, or
500

AAAWWUBBIS: What is the MOST effective way to combine sentences 10 and 11?

(10) I stood up straight. (11) My backpack knocked Ms. Kessler's coffee mug onto the floor.

As I stood up straight, my backpack knocked Ms. Kessler's coffee mug onto the floor.

500

(20) My friends chatted away, but I was lost.
The word lost is not the right word for sentence 20. Which word should replace lost in this sentence? Dreamy, fascinated, clueless, or distracted?

Distracted

500

True or false: if a part of a sentence does not pass the whisper test, it is a complete sentence.

False - we would need more information.

500

What change needs to be made?

(5) As a result, people use this part of the brain to make decisions, solve problems, and acheive goals.

Change acheive to achieve

500

True or false: when quoting evidence, the end punctuation goes outside the quotation marks.

False: It looks "like this." It does not look "like this".

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