"Chill" to credible
"Chill to credible
Teacher to friend
Anon
100

School is kinda stressful right now.

School is currently demanding for many students.

100

The author is kinda trying to make a point.

The author is attempting to communicate a central argument.

100

Please remain seated until you are dismissed.

Stay in your seat till we’re allowed to leave.

100

The rule is unfair.

Make it sound more objective.

 

 The rule is unfair to many students. 

200

A lot of kids are behind this year.

A significant number of students are academically behind this year.

200

The story is about people dealing with stuff.

The story focuses on individuals navigating personal challenges.

200

Your behavior is disrupting the learning environment.

You’re being distracting.

200

This policy failed.

Make it sound less emotional.

This policy failed to meet expectations.

300

The test was pretty hard.

The exam was challenging.

300

Teens are super stressed because of school.

Adolescents experience high levels of stress due to academic pressure.

300

Please submit your assignment by the end of the day.

Turn it in before today ends.

300

The study was super important to the results. 

What's the "bad" word in here we could take out?

The study was important to the results.

400

People didn’t really like the rule change.

Many people opposed the rule change.

400

The rules are confusing and annoying.



The rules are unclear and frustrating for students.

400

You need to focus on the task at hand.

Pay attention to what you’re doing.

400

Purpose: Persuade

Some people think homework might be bad.


Homework places unnecessary strain on students.

500

Homework takes forever.

Homework requires a significant amount of time to complete.

500

Social media messes with people’s heads.

Social media negatively affects mental health.

500

Please lower your voice.

You’re being too loud.

500

Purpose: Inform

This policy is ridiculous.


This policy affects students.

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