AFP please
where should you go to look up an AFP specific-style question?
AFP style guide
carrier
no
"I like trucks and I love AFP trucks."
Comma missing before 'and'
our program name
Amazon Freight Partner program
name one best practice for writing hyperlinked copy?
use descriptive language, avoid saying 'click here'
how do you write our program name
AFP program
relay operations center
yes, this is an Amazon-branded term
"Dear AFP! We're so excited to have you participate in this survey!"
Too many exclamations! Per AFP style, avoid using exclamations. If you must, limit it to one per communication.
Rewrite the bold as a plural possessive: I love the features of the trucks.
I love the trucks' features.
You’re writing instructions on how drivers can access Relay. What personal pronoun do you use (e.g. she/her, he/him, they/them?
they/them
name an acronym that doesn't need to be spelled out on first reference per the AFP style guide
AFP, DOT, FMCSA, MMPM, mph, ROC
The 'T' and 'U' in this header: AFP tractor upgrades
"Wow, this Jeopardy session is full of great info and deets."
Information and details—spell out the full word
nine in the morning to five in the evening
9AM–5PM with an n dash
Which is correct per AFP style: Black, black, or African American?
Black (African American is America-specific, and not all Black people in America consider themselves African American)
how do you write our team name for external audiences (e.g. email sign offs)?
The AFP team
partner
no
"Understanding your needs for simplicity, the processes are now automated."
Misplaced modifier. As written, it reads as if the processes understand the readers' needs.
The following numbers in running copy (e.g. paragraph form):
-1
-216
-10
-one
-216
-10
(we spell out numbers one through nine)
Why is short, easy-to-skim writing more DEI+B friendly?
Reduces cognitive load, makes it easier for those w/ screen readers or cognitive difficulties
Find the AFP-specific error in this sentence:
"Partners, be sure to register your drivers."
your drivers --> your company's drivers
no
'being able to understand the nuances of the industry' isn't parallel with the rest of the items in the series
our team name (external)
'AFP team' or 'Amazon Freight Partner team'
Name one DEI+B aligned alternative to ‘master’ (for example: master list, master brand)?
primary, main, leader