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What revision, if any, is needed in sentences 1 and 2?
(1)Josie went outside. (2)Noticed it was starting to snow.
A. Josie went outside, noticed. It was starting to snow.
B. Josie went. Outside noticed. It was starting to snow.
C. Josie went outside and noticed it was starting to snow.
D. No revision is needed.
C. Josie went outside and noticed it was starting to snow.