Participles-Rewrite
I had lost all my money so I went home.
Losing all my money, I went home
It is (consider/ be important) for the project to be completed by the end of the month.
It is considered to be important for the project to be completed by the end of the month.
The team has worked hard, therefore they deserve a break.
TRUE
The problem needs to be solving immediately.
'Needs to be solved'
After the boys finished their lunch, they went out to play
Say the most brief version
Having finished their lunch, they went out to play
He (regret/see) by the manager while working.
He regrets being seen by the manager while working.
She couldn't attend the meeting since she was feeling sick.
If it is wrong-> fix it
If it is true-> other alternatives
TRUE- as, because
The report, was submitted by the team, was reviewed thoroughly.
The report,( which was)submitted by the team, was reviewed thoroughly.
Derya couldn’t find anything to say as she was totally surprised by his proposal.
Derya couldn’t find anything to say being surprised by his proposal.
They are planning on (avoid/ distract) during the presentation.
They are planning on avoiding being distracted during the presentation.
I didn't finish the report, because of I was busy.
FALSE- after 'because of', dont use a sentence
The letter is expected being sent by the manager tomorrow.
'Expected to be sent'
I became exhausted then I went to bed early.
Having become exhausted, I went to bed early
He (dislike/interrupt) while speaking.
He dislikes being interrupted while speaking.
He didn't attend the conference, as a result of he had a prior commitment.
FALSE
after 'as a result of', don't use a sentence
The presentation was found to be presenting confusing information.
Found to be presented
I had just closed the door when I realised that I had forgetten my keys inside.
Having closed the door, when I realised that I had forgetten my keys inside.
The data is (know/ collect) from various sources.
The data is known to be collected from various sources.
The weather was bad; hence, the flight was delayed.
TRUE- look at the semi colon and comma. They are also important and correct
The report that was submitted yesterday by the committee contains important information.
BONUSS REDUCE IT🥳🥳🥳
The report submitted yesterday by the committee contains important information.