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How can the following be best corrected:
During the 1800s Abraham Lincoln decided that the best thing to do to help end the Civil War was to enact the Emancipation Proclamation which freed the slaves in the South unfortunately Lincoln was assassinated for trying to give all Americans the right to live freely.
During the 1800s, Abraham Lincoln decided that the best thing to do to help end the Civil War was to enact the Emancipation Proclamation, which freed the slaves in the South. Unfortunately, Lincoln was assassinated for trying to give all Americans the right to live freely.