While Bobby was asleep at the party his friends put shaving cream inside his shoes
While Bobby was asleep at the party, his friends put shaving cream inside his shoes
I have thought long and hard on this matter but I still don't understand why you are upset.
I have thought long and hard on this matter, but I still don't understand why you are upset.
I finished my work early therefore I decided to go fishing at the park.
I finished my work early; therefore, I decided to go fishing at the park.
Before I went to work today.
What is a fragment
Before I went to work today.
After Bobby put his shoes on the orange mess leaked all over his feet.
After Bobby put his shoes on, the orange mess leaked all over the floor in his room.
Erica's busy Saturday included shopping with her mother and finishing her research paper.
CORRECT AS IS - Erica's busy Saturday included shopping with her mother and finishing her research paper.
She wanted to go to the party however she had to study for her exams.
She wanted to go to the party; however, she had to study for her exams.
Cassie told us a story it was funny.
Cassie told us a story it was funny.
run-on
His dog came came in the room after he ran to get a towel.
His dog came came in the room, after he ran to get a towel.
One of the effects of the Industrial Revolution was that people relinquished their rural lifestyles and opted to work and live in cities.
Correct as is
One of the effects of the Industrial Revolution was that people relinquished their rural lifestyles and opted to work and live in cities.
I forgot my phone at home; also, I left my wallet in the car.
Correct as written
When we left for school this morning, Bob
When we left for school this morning, Bob
FRAGMENT
His mother never understood how he came home with orange socks because the dog licked the floor and shoes clean
Correct as Is
His mother never understood how he came home with orange socks because the dog licked the floor and shoes clean
FANBOYS stands for....
For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So
John was cooking dinner, meanwhile his wife was setting the table.
John was cooking dinner; meanwhile his wife was setting the table.
The results are in and we know who the winner is
RUN ON
The results are in and we know who the winner is
What do the letters of SWABIs stand for
Since
While
After
Because
If
Every person in the land knew of her beauty and her skill during the boar hunt so news of the king's desire for his daughter to marry spread fast.
Every person in the land knew of her beauty and her skill during the boar hunt, so news of the king's desire for his daughter to marry spread fast.
THAMOs stands for
Therefore, However, Also, Meanwhile, Otherwise
My truck needs repairs, the heat quits working at stop lights.
COMMMA SPLICE
My truck needs repairs, the heat quits working at stop lights.