Mechanics
Punctuation
English
Grammar
Composition
100
MJ went to the store and bought chocolate bread and cookies.
What is MJ went to the store and bought chocolate, bread, and cookies.
100
Hi how are you
What is Hi, how are you?
100
Dear Christie can you to post the PowerPoint slides
What is Dear Christie, can you please post the PowerPoint slides?
100
Without love life is pointless.
What is Without love, life is pointless.
100
I love punctuation yet I still forget the rules from time to time.
What is I love punctuation, yet I still forget the rules from time to time.
200
She doesn't like me or you.
What is She doesn't like me or you.
200
My father never cries in fact he never shows any emotion at all.
What is My father never cries; in fact, he never shows any emotion at all.
200
I have paid my dues therefore I expect all the privileges listed in the contract.
What is I have paid my dues; therefore, I expect all the privileges listed in the contract.
200
Despite seeing you yesterday I don't recognize you.
What is Despite seeing you yesterday, I don't recognize you.
200
Khadijah my best friend is going to the mall today.
What is Khadijah, my best friend, is going to the mall today.
300
"We need to buy more sugar" she said "before it runs out"
What is What is: "We need to buy more sugar," she said, "before it runs out."
300
Charles always comes to class on time whereas Janice never does.
What is Charles always comes to class on time whereas Janice never does.
300

Although I worked for 16 years I was able to find the will to quit.

What is Although I worked for 16 years, I was able to find the will to quit.

300
Lafa likes math however she does not like writing.
What is Lafa likes math; however, she does not like writing.
300
I am ready for my dad a hard-working man to come home.
What is I am ready for my dad, a hard-working man, to come home.
400
In spite of studying hard for the test I failed.
What is In spite of studying hard for the test, I failed.
400
Hamman works for an impressive engineering company he is their top engineer.
What is Hamman works for an impressive engineering company; he is their top engineer.
400
My mother on the other hand does not like chocolate
What is My mother, on the other hand, does not like chocolate.
400

On the contrary eating junk food makes you fat and can make you sick.

What is On the contrary, eating junk food makes you fat and can make you sick.

400
I opened the safe door I took out the money pouch and I concealed it in my desk drawer.
What is I opened the safe door, I took out the money pouch, and I concealed it in my desk drawer.
500
When I finish here I will be glad to help you and that is a promise I will keep.
What is When I finish here, I will be glad to help you; and that is a promise I will keep.
500
This conference has people who have come from Boise, Idaho; Los Angeles, California; and Nashville, Tennessee.
What is This conference has people who have come from Boise Idaho Los Angeles California and Nashville Tennessee.
500
I buy cheese milk and eggs at my neighborhood market apples oranges and grapes from the farmers’ market and aspirin shaving cream and deodorant from the pharmacy.
What is I buy cheese, milk, and eggs at my neighborhood market; apples, oranges, and grapes from the farmers’ market; and aspirin, shaving cream, and deodorant from the pharmacy.
500

My favorite leisure-time activities are going to the movies especially mysteries reading novels especially stories of horror and adventure listening to podcasts and participating in sorts particularly tennis and volleyball.

What is My favorite leisure-time activities are going to the movies, especially mysteries; reading novels, especially stories of horror and adventure; listening to podcasts; and participating in sports, particularly tennis and volleyball.

500
The three winners of the contest were Kelly Gee California Bob Davis Delaware and Sandy Hu Nevada.
What is The three winners of the contest were Kelly Gee, California; Bob Davis, Delaware; and Sandy Hu, Nevada.
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