Interruptions
Series
Equal Adjectives
Dialogue
FANBOYS
100

Help I can't find my homework!

Help, I can't find my homework!

100

Lunch was pizza pizza and pizza.

Lunch was pizza, pizza, and pizza.

100

I carry a heavy heavy backpack.

I carry a heavy, heavy backpack.

100

Add the quotation marks.


Miss Sweet Tea called, said Mom.

"Miss Sweet Tea called," said Mom.

100

I went to school and my brother stayed home.


DAILY DOUBLE

I went to school, and my brother stayed home.

200

I get it Karen.

I get it, Karen.

200

China Japan Korea and Thailand are all part of the Far East.


DAILY DOUBLE

China, Japan, Korea, and Thailand are all part of the Far East.

200

Doug has a grey funny dog who listens to rap.

Doug has a grey, funny dog who listens to rap.

200

Add the quotation marks.

Louis said, Mrs. Gorf must be a really great teacher.

Louis said, "Mrs. Gorf must be a really great teacher."

200

Porkchop is a dog but he's a vegetarian.

Porkchop is a dog, but he's a vegetarian.

300

Kale which I hate is better than lettuce.

Kale, which I hate, is better than lettuce.

300

Leonardo Michaelangelo Donatello and Raphael are all turtles.

Leonard, Michaelangelo, Donatello, and Raphael are all turtles.

300

My friend's tall pretty cousin is a cheerleader.

My friend's tall, pretty cousin is a cheerleader.

300

What's wrong here?

"Dad, my ski jacket is too small.  You could be arrested," complained Dave.  Dad responded, "You're still my little boy."

When a new speaker begins talking, you must start a new paragraph.

300

My mom served meatloaf and potatoes for dinner.

My mom served meatloaf and potatoes for dinner.

(No change.)

400

Dave who thinks he is too skinny wears too many shirts.

Dave, who thinks he is too skinny, wears too many shirts.

400

David lifts weights eats lots of protein and stops moving around.

David lifts weights, eats lots of protein, and stops moving around.

400

Todd didn't want to ride the very early kindergarten bus.

Todd didn't want to ride the very early kindergarten bus.

400

I saw a loaf of whole wheat at the zoo said Robin.

Batman said It was bread in captivity.

"I saw a loaf of whole wheat at the zoo," said Robin.

Batman said, "It was bread in captivity."

400

Joy shouted at Todd but Todd stayed quiet so she stabbed him with her pencil.

Joy shouted at Todd, but Todd stayed quiet, so she stabbed him with her pencil.

500

Joy who is loud pokes Todd who is quiet.

Joy, who is loud, pokes Todd, who is quiet.

500

The choir sang Hakuna Matata The Star-Spangled Banner and Disney Dazzle.

The choir sang Hakuna Matata, The Star-Spangled Banner, and Disney Dazzle.

500

My grandmother's long skinny green garden hose has holes to water the lawn.

My grandmother's long, skinny, green garden hose has holes to water the lawn.

500

Add the quotation marks and punctuation.


Judy have you seen Porkchop asked Doug

"Judy, have you seen Porkchop?" asked Doug.

500

Thanos put on his glove and snapped his fingers so half of the population vanished.

Thanos put on his glove and snapped his fingers, so half of the population vanished.

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