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Dr. King and Malcolm X both worked hard to establish legal equality for blacks. These include voting rights, desegregation, and increased representation in government and politics. In a similar fashion, both men's tactics and strategies were vastly different.
"In a similar fashion" is not an appropriate phrase to use in the last sentence.
Some people find gardening dull. In the same way, some people like nothing better than to work in their gardens.
"In the same way" should not be used to express a difference in views on gardening.
Although Faber and Granger are different in their quest for enlightenment and individuality, each man responds differently to the oppressive society Bradbury creates.
Both "different" and "differently" are usually not used in the thesis statement.
Different countries across the world has diverse cultural practices, and this has an effect on work relationships and development. Geert Hofstede came up with a structured way of comparing cultural dimensions of different countries. The theory explains the impacts of a community’s culture on the values of the community members, and the way these values relate to their behaviors.
first sentence: has -> have (subject-verb agreement)
The blooms of Red Beauty roses last longer than those of most other roses. Like wise, the blooms of the Midnight Dream rose are long-lasting.
"Like wise" is not spelled correctly!
The Civil Rights Movement against racism of the 1960s in the US gave birth to some of the most global-scale renowned activists. Martin Luther King and Malcolm X, we all know these two great men. It is impossible to analyze the twentieth-century race conflicts without mentioning these two people. They are neither civil rights leaders who have genuinely made a big change on the issue of racial equality in the US and around the world.
"neither" in the last sentence is incorrect
Malcolm, similar to King, was viewed as a preacher of hatred and violence. Malcolm X chastised King and his views on nonviolence. As a member of the Nation of Islam, he embraced white America's value system, making everything black good and everything white evil.
"similar to King" in the first sentence is not appropriate
College cost more, present more academic challenges, and offer a more social environment than high school.
subject-verb agreement
Like Brazil, United States takes up a significant portion of its continent. It extends from the Atlantic Ocean to the Pacific Ocean and has a land mass of 8 million square kilometers, not including Alaska, Hawaii, and other territories. As a result of its size, it is fair to say that many people in United States have not visited much of their country.
"United States" is missing an article.
In 2009, according to the US Census, 55 percent of DC residents were classified as “Black or African American” and 35 percent of its residents were classified as “white.” London, by contrast, has very few minorities—in 2006, 70 percent of its population was “white,” while only 10 percent was “black.” The racial demographic differences between the citys are drastic.
"citys" in the second sentence is spelled incorrectly.
Although Darwin and Lamarck came to different conclusions about whether acquired traits can be inherited, they did not share the key distinction of recognizing that species evolve over time.
"Although" hints that the second part of the sentence will present a similarity.
Malcolm X's manner of protest includes utilizing violence against violence and unequal rights, as well as advocating segregation of African Americans and whites. Martin Luther King's method, in like manner, includes peaceful marches and struggles against violence, as well as pushing for black-and-white integration.
"in like manner" in the second sentence is not appropriate
On the surface, it may seem as though woman’s roles have changed drastically throughout history; however, a comparison of various eras illustrates how woman are still repressed and shamed, especially in sexual expression and behavior.
"woman's" and "woman" are misspelled
One important similarity between Brazil and the United States is there massive size. Both Brazil and the United States are extremely large countries. Brazil covers almost half of the South American continent.
"there" in the first sentence is incorrect.
Many differences are clear to even beginner gardeners. Never the less, some of their differences are not very obvious.
"Never the less" in the second sentence is mispelled.
Both Red Beauty and Midnight Dream roses are known for the size of their blooms, their color, and their fragrance. On the other hand, they are easy to grow.
Identify and correct the error.
"On the other hand" is incorrect because the similarities between the two roses are the main idea of these sentences.
While apples are a central part of American folklore, likewise oranges are more central to the United States economy.
Identifty and correct the error.
"While" hints that the two fruits have different characteristics therefore, "likewise" is incorrect.
Even though many people cannot tell the difference between Coke and Pepsi there are distinct differences in taste, nutritional content, and advertising.
Missing punctuation after "Even though many people cannot tell the difference between Coke and Pepsi"
Finally, both countries share a value important: individualism. Brazil works hard to defend the concept of freedom of choice. Citizens believe that they have the right to do and be whatever they desire as long as they do not hurt others.
"value important" is not the correct word order
First, in terms of cost, college is more expensive then high school because of tuition, living expenses, and books. Anyone who wishes to attend college must pay fees, whereas it is free to attend high school. College tuition can start at roughly $1,500 per term and can wind up costing as much as $2,000.
"then" in the first sentence is misspelled based on the context.
The blooms of Red Beauty roses last longer than those of most other roses. However, the blooms of the Midnight Dream rose are long-lasting.
Identify and correct the error.
"However" should not be used to express similarities between the two roses.
According to King, segregation in America and colonialism in the Third World were denials of human dignity and value. Through boycotts and marches, he hoped to end racial segregation. He felt that the abolition of segregation would improve the likelihood of integration.
Malcolm X, likewise, spearheaded a movement for black empowerment. His goal was to restore the power of oppressed black people via spiritual teaching of racism, economic growth, and self-defense training.
"likewise" in the second paragraph should not be used to express differences between Malcolm X and MLK.
Likewise authoritative and permissive parenting are seemingly complete opposites, they have one key similarity: parents who practice both parenting styles encourage their children to make their own decisions.
"Likewise" is not an appropriate connector to use here.
The US market noted an increase in sales of more than 10% between 2014 and 2015 (Brown, n.p), the increase is in line with the views of many consumers that organic foods are safer, tastier, and healthier compared to inorganic foods.
comma splice, two independent sentences are added together with a comma.
Third, in college, there are more oppurtunities to participate in sports, and clubs for students than in high school. College students have both the benefits of being able to join varsity sports teams as well as being able to use any athletic facilities the college has to offer, such as gyms, pools, and weight rooms.
"oppurtunities" in the first sentence is misspelled.