Grammar
My parents give me the console last summer
My parents gave me the console last summer
He has incredible RAM
It has incredible RAM
I played two hours with it.
I played for two hours with it.
Wach
Watch
I would recommend it to people that has more than 9 years.
I would recommend it to people that are more than 9 years old.
It's not any problems with it
There aren't any problems with it
The only problem I found in it...
The only problem I found with it...
I would recommend it because is not so expensive.
I would recommend it because it is not so expensive.
Collors
Colours
It's games usually are so good.
It's games are usually so good.
I was given it for 3 years for my birthday
I was given it 3 years ago for my birthday
I would recommend it, but only to people that...
The best about it...
The best thing about it...
Incrediball
Incredible
The best I like about it is...
The thing I like best about it is...
It's not the first I had.
It's not the first I have had.
I can use it to see videos.
I can use it to watch videos.
I like apps like Whatsapp to communicate, and to watch videos ___ ______ Youtube, TikTok etc.
I like apps like Whatsapp to communicate, and to watch videos I like Youtube, TikTok etc.
Quality
It is my best console I'm no dudes
It is without a doubt my best console
It has very good quality
It is very good quality
Sometimes I can't put it in the pocket
Sometimes I can't put it in my pocket
It was given by my father (2 words missing)
It was given to me by my father
Profetional
Professional
I recommend it because is so useful and is skibidi
I recommend it because it is so useful.