Class Mistakes 1
Incorrect (1x): Then are grandma asked us if we were going to the party.
Correct: Then our grandma asked us if we were going to the party.
Incorrect (1x): The sun hang low in the sky, creating a warm sensation over the school.
Correct: The sun hung low in the sky, creating a warm sensation over the school.
Incorrect (1x): I was eating a vanilla ice cream because its my favorite flavor.
Correct: I was eating a vanilla ice cream because it's my favorite flavor.
Incorrect (1x): My dad went all the way to spain to get the cat.
Correct: My dad went all the way to Spain to get the cat.
Incorrect (1x): It felt as if hours had pass sitting on that bench.
Correct: It felt as if hours had passed sitting on that bench.
Incorrect (2x): "See you soon," I called out even though I know it wouldn't be the same.
Correct: "See you soon," I called out, even though I knew it wouldn't be the same.
Incorrect (2x): Then after we finished eating we went to ride the roller coaster.
Correct: Then, after we finished eating, we went to ride the roller coaster.
Incorrect (2x): She was just a baby when her mom bring her to New york.
Correct: She was just a baby when her mom brought her to New York.
Incorrect (2x): As I explored the ship seamed to get bigger.
Correct: As I explored, the ship seemed to get bigger.
Incorrect (2x): One day my dad was driving through the neighbor while my mom was working at home.
Correct: One day, my dad was driving through the neighborhood while my mom was working at home.
Incorrect (3x): The batwing is the most scary roller coaster because goes upside down.
Correct: The Batwing is the scariest roller coaster because it goes upside down.
Correct: Three years later we got another dog. He was very energetic.
Incorrect (4x): When dad came home he tried to scare my mom But my mom actuallay like that cat. Then we kept the cat.
Correct: When dad came home he tried to scare my mom, but my mom actually liked that cat, so we kept the cat.
Incorrect (5x): We went back & forth & we even saw are family member's there was food & everything we & my cousin got bored so we played tag.
Correct: We went back and forth and we saw our family members. There was food and everything. My cousin and I got bored so we played tag.
Incorrect (4x): On the first night in Chicago my family and I went to a concert the concert was in a enormous building.
Correct: On the first night in Chicago, my family and I went to a concert. The concert was in an enormous building.
Incorrect (5x): I wondered around the school looking in different classroom, I didn't see anyone so I left and went to wendys.
Correct: I wandered around the school looking in different classroom, I didn't see anyone, so I left and went to Wendy's.
Incorrect (4x): frome one side of the boat to the other I spotted a map as if a greater power had lead me to it.
Correct: From one side of the boat to the other, I spotted a map as if a greater power had led me to it.
Incorrect (6x): I axidentely fell & scrapeded me knee it was bleeding I felt so imbarased.
Correct: I accidentally fell and scraped my knee. It started bleeding and I felt so embarrassed.
Incorrect (6x): When the director said "action" we started to perform the scene was very complicated and i cant remember my lines.
Correct: When the director said "Action," we started to perform the scene. It was very complicated and I couldn't remember my lines.
Incorrect (8x): One year after that we got a dog my dad went again to europe to get the dog he was a baby like three inches long.
Correct: One year after that, we got a dog. My dad went to Europe again to get the dog. He was a baby, like three inches long.