Revising 1
How should sentence 3 be revised?
A. She set up her phone tripod, and ring light in the corner of her room.
B. She set up her phone, tripod and ring light in the corner of her room.
C. She set up her phone, tripod, and ring light in the corner of her room.
D. No change is needed.
C. She set up her phone, tripod, and ring light in the corner of her room.
What is the BEST transition to add to the beginning of sentence 9?
A. For example,
B. Later,
C. In contrast,
D. As a result.
B. Later,
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 3?
A. Insert these after like
B. Change this to these
C. Change ways to way's
D. No change is needed
B. Change this to these
What change needs to be made in sentence 3?
A. Change although to when
B. insert a comma after Austin
C. Insert a comma after hometown
D. No change is needed
B. insert a comma after Austin
What are the three components to an SCR?
Restate and Answer
Cite your evidence
Explain your answer
Which sentence should be removed because it does NOT support the main idea of the paragraph?
A. Sentence 17
B. Sentence 18
C. Sentence 20
D. Sentence 23
B. Sentence 18
What is the MOST effective way to combine sentences 10 and 11?
A. Early in the morning the tide was low they visited the beach.
B. Visiting the beach early in the morning, the tide was low.
C. They visited the beach early in the morning, when the tide was low.
D. The tide was low, they visited the beach early in the morning.
C. They visited the beach early in the morning, when the tide was low.
What change needs to be made in sentence 4?
A. Change often to oftener
B. Change help to helps
C. Insert a comma after activities
D. No change is needed.
B. Change help to helps
What change needs to be made in sentence 5?
A. Change spent to spended
B. Insert a comma after Austin
C. Change barton springs pool to Barton Springs Pool
D. No change is needed
C. Change barton springs pool to Barton Springs Pool
When you write your essay, what should you do before turning it in.
Look for those simple mistakes (capitalization, punctuation, does it make sense)
How should sentence 28 be revised?
A. She felt proud proud but, and overwhelmed at the same time.
B. She felt proud but overwhelmed, at the same time.
C. She felt proud but overwhelmed at the same time.
D. She felt proud, but overwhelmed at the same time.
D. She felt proud, but overwhelmed at the same time.
Which sentence should be removed because it does NOT support the main idea of the paragraph (14-21)?
A. Sentence 15
B. Sentence 16
C. Sentence 17
D. Sentence 20
C. Sentence 17
What change needs to be made in sentence 6?
A. Change there to their
B. Change there to they're
C. Add a comma after students
D. No change is needed
A. Change there to their
What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 8?
A. My brother likes to ride his bike. My sister enjoys playing soccer she also loves nature trails.
B. My brother likes to ride his bike, and my sister enjoys playing soccer; she also loves nature trails.
C. My brother likes to ride his bike and, my sister enjoys playing soccer, she also loves nature trails.
D. My brother likes to ride his bike and my sister enjoys playing soccer and also loves nature trails.
B. My brother likes to ride his bike, and my sister enjoys playing soccer; she also loves nature trails.
What is something you should do in your Explain?
Which sentence would provide a strong conclusion for the story?
A. It was interesting
B. Ava learned that success online comes with both excitement and responsibility.
C. The phone screen turned off.
D. She went to school the next day.
B. Ava learned that success online comes with both excitement and responsibility.
Sentence 2 needs to be revised. Which is the BEST revision?
A. Some people look for shells, interesting rocks and pieces of sea glass.
B. Some people look for shells interesting, rocks, and pieces of sea glass.
C. Some people look for shells, interesting rocks, and pieces of sea glass.
D. No change is needed.
C. Some people look for shells, interesting rocks, and pieces of sea glass.
A. succesfull
B. successful
C. succesful
D. successfull
B. successful
What change needs to be made in sentence 9?
A. Insert a comma after family
B. Change family to Family
C. Change like to likes
D. No change is needed
A. Insert a comma after family
When getting credit for my text evidence what is important to remember?
When it is asking to conclude what skill are we focusing on?
Making an inference (Read the first and last paragraph)
What does it mean to paraphrase?
To rewrite what you read in your own words.
What is the correct way to write sentence 7?
A. Still other students join clubs. To explore interests they might not study during the school day.
B. Still other students joining clubs to explore interests they might not study during the school day.
C. Still other students join clubs to explore interests they might not study during the school day.
D. Still other students join clubs they explore interests they might not study during the school day.
C. Still other students join clubs to explore interests they might not study during the school day.
The author wants to replace sentence 15 with a stronger closing. Which sentence would BEST improve the ending?
A. We hope to hear from you soon about activities our family can enjoy together.
B. The weather is usually warm here.
C. Parks are important places.
D. Thank you again.
A. We hope to hear from you soon about activities our family can enjoy together.
Should I wait for the last 30 minutes to write my ECR
No! Plan your time wisely. This test should only take 4 hours so if you know you need more time start with the ECR!