What would you call or label the words that let the reader know who is speaking.
speaker tag
"If you don't hush up" I scowled "I'm going to pour dish soap over your head"
"If you don't hush up," I scowled, "I'm going to pour dish soap over your head."
"Do you know what I know?" suzie questioned.
The speaker tag tag needs a capital "s" for Suzie.
How many mistakes are here: Fred whispered "I think I need help with dialogue". "I can help you" Replied suzie "if you come over here." "But", answered Fred. "I don't want to move". "move now!" Shouted Suzie.
14!
Fred whispered, "I think I need help with dialogue." "I can help you," replied Suzie, "if you come over here." "But," answered Fred, "I don't want to move." "Move now!" shouted Suzie.
How many mistakes are here: she stated "I need 4 lovely volunteers" He asked "do you need strong people or smart people"? "both" She replied "Would be helpful." "Then I'm your man!" He yelled
13!
She stated, "I need 4 lovely volunteers." He asked, "Do you need strong people or smart people?" "Both," she replied, "would be helpful." "Then I'm your man!" he yelled.