Author's Purpose
Tone
Explanation
Evidence
Revising and Editing
100

 What is the author’s purpose for writing this article?

To highlight the challenges young women face in college admissions.


100

 What tone does the author convey in her writing?

 Concern and frustration regarding college admissions.

100

How does the author feel about the competition among female applicants?

 It is intense and often unfair.

100
  • What statistics about female applicants does the author provide?

More than 55 percent of applicants are female.

100

What is the most effective transition to add to the beginning of sentence 2?
Options:

  • A. For example,
  • B. Likewise,
  • C. Instead,
  • D. Consequently,

Likewise, 

200

What conclusion can be made about equality?

Gender balance sometimes outweighs merit in admissions decisions.

200

What does the author feel about current admissions practices

They are unfairly biased against female applicants.

200

 What challenges do young women face today?

Higher standards to gain admission into top colleges.

200

How have applicant ratios changed over time?

It went from two to one to three to one.


200

 The author has not used the most effective word in paragraph 3. Which word should replace "have" to create a more effective sentence?
Options:

  • A. carry
  • B. accept
  • C. manage
  • D. enroll

enroll

300

Why does the author use a rhetorical question in paragraph 9?

 To emphasize the irony of the situation for young women.

300

 How does the author's experience shape her perspective?

 She reflects on simpler admissions from 30 years ago compared to today.

300

 How does the author reflect on her daughter's experience? 

She empathizes with her disappointment over waitlist letters.

300

What does the author say about the percentage of women in higher education?

More than 56 percent of undergraduates nationwide are women

300

Which of these sentences should the author add at the beginning of paragraph 6 to serve as the most effective position statement for her essay? 

  • A. I think the competition is fierce among female applicants.
  • B. College admissions for young women today are increasingly challenging and competitive.
  • C. Many young women face significant hurdles in gaining admission to top colleges.
  • D. The landscape of college admissions has changed dramatically for young women.

 B. College admissions for young women today are increasingly challenging and competitive.
This statement succinctly captures the main argument of the passage regarding the difficulties faced by female applicants.

400

Which sentence best expresses inequity for young women?

 A. My staff and I carefully read these young women's essays about their passion for poetry, their desire to discover vaccines and their conviction that they can make the world a better place. (Paragraph 4)

B. I was once one of those girls applying to college, but that was 30 years ago, when applying to college was only a tad more difficult than signing up for a membership at the Y. (Paragraph 5)

C. Had she been a male applicant, there would have been little, if any, hesitation to admit. (Paragraph 8)

D. In the meantime, I'm sending out waitlist and rejection letters for nearly 3,000 students. (Paragraph 13)

 C. Had she been a male applicant, there would have been little, if any, hesitation to admit.

400

What emotion does the author show about waitlist letters?

Empathy and disappointment for the students receiving them.

400

 How does the author compare male and female applicants?

 Male applicants are often admitted with lower qualifications.

400

What prediction does the author make about future degrees awarded?

Only 42 percent of baccalaureate degrees will be awarded to men.

400

 The meaning of a sentence in paragraph 12 is unclear. Which word or phrase should replace "more accomplished" in this sentence?

  • A. catching up on sleep
  • B. a longer weekend
  • C. a reduced workload
  • D. a longer school week

a reduced workload

500

What are the implications of gender balance in admissions?

 It affects the qualifications needed for female applicants.

500

How does the author demonstrate gender balance issues?

By showing how male applicants are favored due to their scarcity.

500

What historical context does the author provide?

 The shift from a male-dominated college system to a more balanced one.

500

What is the significance of the “tipping point” in admissions?

It indicates a shift in gender balance and its effects on campus attractiveness

500

 What is the correct way to write a sentence from paragraph 13?
Sentence: "I will linger over letters, remembering individual students I've met, essays I loved, accomplishments I've admired."
Options:

  • A. I will linger over letters, remembering individual students I've met, and reflecting on their accomplishments.
  • B. Lingering over letters, I remember the individual students I've met and their accomplishments.
  • C. As I linger over letters, I recall the individual students I've met and their remarkable achievements.
  • D. When I linger over letters, I remember the individual students I've met, and admire their accomplishments.


 C. As I linger over letters, I recall the individual students I've met and their remarkable achievements.

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