Missing Commas
Anna Jace and I were hiking down the road.
Anna, Jace, and I were hiking down the road.
Finally, we had finished setting up our tent. Later that night, Dad turned to us and asked, "S'mores time?"
Finally, we had finished setting up our tent.
Later that night, Dad turned to us and asked, "S'mores time?"
Oh wow I said in shock. Thats terrible!
"Oh, wow!" I said in shock. "Thats terrible!"
We went to the park.
- went
We walked a few blocks away to the small park that was nestled in our neighborhood.
All of a sudden the car started clacking and slowing down!
All of a sudden, the car started clacking and slowing down!
"I don't like it here," Janna whispered. Suddenly, we heard a loud crack!
"I don't like it here," Janna whispered.
Suddenly, we heard a loud crack!
"No way."
"Yep!"
"Are you sure?"
"No way," said Billy.
"Yep!" Sarah stated.
"Are you sure?" he asked.
We got to the boat.
- got
It took a few minutes of driving the jet skis, but we finally steered ourselves to the edge of the boat.
"Oh no! Not again." I groaned.
"Oh, no! Not again." I groaned.
I turned to Mom, "How much longer?"
"Just a few minutes," she said.
"Thank goodness," I said in relief.
SPLOOSH
We jumped off feet first.
Sploosh!
We jumped off feet first.
I saw something scary.
- saw
- something
- scary
I looked over and was startled when I saw the dark outline of a creature.
I was sitting patiently but Diana was already getting out of the car!
I was sitting patiently, but Diana was already getting out of the car!
“I hate how cold it’s getting,” Lilly complained. "Same here!" I nodded back.
“I hate how cold it’s getting,” Lilly complained.
"Same here!" I nodded back.
Me, Rory, and Penelope all in the boat. Just before dinner time.
Me: Hey, are our life jackets around?
Me, Rory, and Penelope were all in the boat. It was just before dinner time.
I looked around and asked, "Hey, are our life jackets around?"
We heard a weird noise from the car.
- weird noise
Clank! Click! Clank! Our car's engine was suddenly making loud, horrible noises.
"No way," I said with hesitancy.
SCREEECHHH the tires slide to a stop.
Screech! The tires squealed in pain as we slid to a stop on the side of the road.