EDITING AND REVISING

RULE OF3

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2. TO CONNECT TO THE IDEAS IN THE PREVIOUS SENTENCES, WHAT TRANSITION SHOULD AMAYA ADD TO THE BEGINNING OF SENTENCE 3?

H. HOWEVER

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4. WHICH SENTENCE SHOULD AMAYA ADD TO FOLLOW AND SUPPORT SENTENCE 13?

J. YOUR BODY CAN SURVIVE ON ITS OWN ENERGY RESERVES FOR A LONG TIME

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6. AMAYA WANTS TO USE A MORE DESCRIPTIVE VERB IN SENTENCE 21. WHAT IS THE BEST REPLACEMENT FOR FOUND?

G. RESCUED

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3. WHICH SENTENCES SHOULD AMAYA REARRANGE TO IMPROVE HER ORGANIZATION AND FLOW OF IDEAS?

D. MOVE SENTENCE 7 SO THAT IT FOLLOWS SENTENCE 9

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5. HOW SHOULD AMAYA REWRITE SENTENCE 15 TO MAKE HER MEANING CLEAR?

B. MOST PEOPLE WHO GET LOST AND DIE IN THE WILDERNESS DIE FROM EXPOSURE

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1. AMAYA WANTS TO ADD ANOTHER SENTENCE TO HER INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH. WHAT WOULD BE THE BEST SENTENCE TO ADD JUST AFTER SENTENCE 2?

B. IN FACT, MANY PEOPLE HAVE NEVER EVEN HEARD OF THE RULE OF 3'S.

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2. WHAT IS THE BEST WAY TO REVISE SENTENCE 3?

F. AN ACTIVE VOLCANO ERUPTED AT METIS SHOAL, AND THIS ERUPTION CAUSED A HEAVY FLOW OF LAVA

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4. WHAT CHANGE, IF ANY, SHOULD BE MADE IN SENTENCE 6?

G. CHANGE SCIENTISTS TO SCIENTISTS'

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1. WHAT IS THE BEST WAY TO REVISE SENTENCE 1?

D. NATURE CAN DO SOME AMAZING THINGS; SOMETIME PEOPLE EVEN GET TO WATCH

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5. WHAT CHANGE, IF ANDY SHOULD BE MADE IN SENTENCE 7?

C. CHANGE THEY TO IT

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3. WHAT CHANGE, IF ANY, SHOULD BE MADE IN SENTENCE 5?

A. CHANGE THEIR TO HER