The Hook
Thesis essentials
structure and flow
pitfalls
tone and audience
100

This is the name for the very first sentence or two of an introduction, meant to grab the reader's attention.

What is the Hook (or Opener)

100

A good thesis must take a clear, firm stance on an issue, meaning it must be this.

What is Arguable?

100

The overall shape of an introduction, moving from broad general information to a narrow, specific claim.

What is the Funnel (or Inverted Triangle) structure?

100

Starting an essay with the cliché: "Since the dawn of time, humans have wondered...

What is being Overly Broad (or Generalized)?

100

The introductory tone expected in most formal, research-heavy college assignments.

The introductory tone expected in most formal, research-heavy college assignments.

200

A brief, compelling story or real-world example used to open an essay, often effective in persuasive writing

What is an Anecdote

200

The thesis statement is almost always placed here in a standard academic introduction.

What is the Last sentence (or sentences)?

200

These sentences provide the reader with essential background knowledge, placed between the hook and the thesis.

What are Context (or Background) sentences

200

The error committed by the sentence: "This essay will now examine the effects of renewable energy."

What is Announcing (or writing a placeholder introduction)

200

The primary factor that dictates whether an anecdote or a statistic is the better choice for an opening hook.

What is the Audience (or Purpose)?

300

A question asked in the introduction for dramatic effect or to stimulate thought, not to elicit a literal answer.

What is a Rhetorical Question?

300

This term describes a thesis that is narrow enough to be fully proven within the confines of the paper.

What is Specific (or Focused)?

300

This element, sometimes included after the thesis, briefly lists the main points or organization of the body paragraphs.

What is the Roadmap (or Preview of points)?

300

The weakness of using a dictionary definition as an opening hook.

What is being Generic (or Unoriginal/Predictable)

300

This term refers to the writer's attitude toward the subject, which should be established immediately in the introduction.

What is Tone?

400

This type of hook grounds the essay in data, such as "One in five Americans suffer from chronic pain."

What is a Startling Statistic?

400

This is the claim: "The United States government is a complex system of checks and balances."

What is a Factual (or non-arguable) claim?

400

The failure to link the broad opening of the introduction to the specific argument of the thesis creates this problem.

What is a Lack of Flow (or Disjointedness)

400

The failure to define complex or technical terminology used in the context section of the introduction.

What is a Lack of Clarity (or Ambiguity)?

400

A type of essay, like a narrative or personal reflection, where the thesis statement may be implied or delayed instead of being explicitly stated.

What is a Creative or Narrative Essay?

500

The transition from a broad hook to the topic's necessary context is often called this part of the introduction.

What is the Bridge (or Background/Context)?

500

The term for a preliminary thesis statement that is used to guide research but is expected to change during the writing process.

What is a Working Thesis?

500

The structural role of context sentences in a research paper that justifies the essay's existence by pointing out a lack of previous study.

What is Identifying the Research Gap

500

The common mistake of starting an introduction with a detailed, unrelated side story that takes up too much space.

What is Disproportionate Length (or an Overly Long Anecdote)?

500

Starting an introduction by directly addressing the reader with phrases like "You might agree that..." is often discouraged in academic writing because it violates this principle.

What is Maintaining an Objective Distance (or Avoiding Second-Person Pronouns)?

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