Main idea
One day there was a kid who was playing fortnite. He was winning games and bragging to his friends that he is better than them. A couple hours passed and while he was playing his friends told him that they have someone that is better than him. He started to say no i am the best. So they 1v1 and he lost and got so mad and just quit fortnite for life.
What is the main idea of this story
Dont think that your the best at everything you do
Student should have nap time.
What is wrong with this thesis statement
There is no reasoning
What do you need in a conclusion?
Claim,thesis and conclusion sentence
What is the very first sentence of your introduction?
Hook
What is the definition of theme
the subject of a talk, a piece of writing a person's thoughts
One day there was this boy who liked to joke around as a Shepard. He decided to play a little prank and yell Wolf Wolf Everyone ran to there homes and he was laughing.Than one time he yelled "wolf wolf" no one helped at all because they thought he was lying and there was a actual wolf and the boy got eaten.
What statement supports the main idea in the story on why you should never lie?
"Than one time he yelled Wolf Wolf no one helped at all because he was lying"
Should students have free-day everyday.
What is wrong with this thesis statement
Its asking a question
what does a conclusion do in a essay?
It wraps up the information in an essay
What is the last sentence in your introduction?
Thesis statements
how do you find the theme in a story?
By finding the meaning of the story
Today Jeffery wasn't being on his best behavior and his mother said if he does good today than he will be rewarded but he took advantage of her and did bad things anyway now he is in big trouble.
What is the main idea?
If you do bad things you wont be rewarded
Teachers should get more pay because of their hard work and how important their job is.
Is this a proper thesis statement
Yes
Overall the lunch food should be changed.
should this be the first sentence in a conclusion
Yes
Should the claim be after the thesis statements in an intro?
No
one day the penguins were huddled around and Memphis started singing but everyone started saying how bad it was. So then he started dancing with his feet and then the people became attracted to it
What is the theme
Everyone is unique in there own way
John was playing a game with his friends. He was playing basket ball. When he was playing he was traveling. He was cheating and people were getting mad because it wasn't fair. Than a coach came and said you are disqualified and John was sad.
What is the main idea.
To never cheat in any game play fair
You should be able to use your phones at school for educational and emergency purposes.
What is wrong with this thesis statements?
uses words like you/your
The school teachers are bad.
can this be opinion be in an argumentative essay.
No
What number paragraph is the introduction?
1st
turtle and the rabbit. The rabbit wanted the territory but the turtle was disagreeing so the rabbit wanted to race the turtle. And when the rabbit was ahead he started being cocky and the turtle won.
What is the lesson thought in this story.
Slow and steady wins the race.
How do you find out what is a main idea in a story?
look in a story on what is happening and you point out what is the main idea on what the story is
A:Students shouldn't have uniforms
B:you should not have to wear your uniforms.
C:Students shouldn't have to wear uniforms because it is comfortable and it exercises their 1st amendment right.
which is the correct thesis statement?
(C)
In conclusion you should not go to aftercare.It sucks The End
What is wrong with this conclusion
It says you ,No thesis ,no concluding sentence.
People should have PE Because it is very important t have physical health in your life.
Is this the hook,claim or thesis statement
Thesis statement
Trip and Nemo started swimming up to a boat even though his dad was saying no. But Nemo wasn't listening and once he got to the boat he got captured and couldn't see his dad.
To listen to your parents