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After 2 hours looking for his family I noticed that he was leading me somewhere.
needs a comma after "family"
After 2 hours looking for his family, I noticed that he was leading me somewhere.
Who is Rudy taking on a date?
Patricia
What is a tool you can use to level up your vocabulary?
thesaurus
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I felt like i was hallucinating i heard a noise
"i" should be capitalized. There should be a period between "hallucinating" and "I," and after "noise"
I felt like I was hallucinating. I heard a noise.
What typical boys' toy is mentioned repeatedly throughout the story
G.I. Joe
What is narrative writing?
story telling
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I said no and they tried to force me with weapons, my creature flew me away and we hid in the Taiga forest.
"No" should be in quotes. The comma should be a period. "my" and "forest" should be capital.
I said "no" and they tried to force me with weapons. My creature flew me away and we hid in the Taiga Forest.
Where does Rudy take Patricia?
Steaks, Steaks, y mas Steaks
What are the 5 senses?
touch, sight, sound, taste, and smell
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Me and my team prepared to get on a small helicopter nicknamed little bird as we were flying out of base
"my team and I" is grammatically correct. We need commas around the name of the helicopter, which also needs to be capitalized. "As" should be "so" and the rest of the phrase should be adjusted
My team and I prepared to get on a small helicopter, nicknamed Little Bird, so we could fly out of the base.
What does the phrase "robbing the cradle" mean?
It is a comment someone makes when they feel another person is dating someone significantly younger than them.
When you slow down a moment in your writing, what happens to the length of your writing?
It increases
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As I was waking up I felt a weird sensation all over my body, as if i was still dreaming but i knew i was awake.
Comma after "waking up," and the comma after "body" should be a period. The second sentence needs "It was" to begin the sentence, and a comma is needed before "but. Also, "the "i"s should be capital.
As I was waking up, I felt a weird sensation all over my body. It was as if i was still dreaming, but I knew I was awake.
What song is Uncle Juan known for?
Tort y Frijoles
What are the 4 stages of a Narrative story?
beginning (setting), middle (rising action), climax, and end