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Tori and Vickie enjoy living on planet earth.
Capitalize Earth
Number of paragraphs in an essay
5
Because I like them.
Fragment
a word used to connect clauses or sentences (FANBOYS, SWABI WUUBA)
Conjunction
Holiday on February 14th
Valentine's Day
Since I love teaching I am excited to come teach my students.
Add a comma between teaching and I
Found at the beginning of the essay to catch the reader's attention
Hook
I love dogs and cats but I do not like rabbits and I really do not like snakes that bite.
Run on
Comparison not using like or as (ex. My dad is a bear)
Metaphor
Movie with a funny snowman and a dramatic sister with ice powers
Frozen
"I love macaroni and cheese candy canes, said Za'Nya excitedly.
Add " between , and said
Claim you will argue in your paper. Typically includes three reasons and is found at the end of the introduction paragraph.
Thesis statement
Lasheera drew a picture it was very beautiful.
Run on
The prefix "mono" means
one
Colors of the rainbow in order
Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue, Indigo, Violet
Since Jeremy and Jayden enjoy playing basketball they play as much as possible They even have a basketball court at home!
Add comma after basketball
Add period after possible
Number of body paragraphs based on this thesis:
Students should have recess in middle school because they need exercise, they need time to socialize with friends, and they need to learn various types of sports.
That was why I ran away from the Tooth Fairy.
Fragment
Position word (ex. on, under, behind, from, to)
Preposition
Ms. Beaudet's first name
Laura
luca are going too the icecream shop!
Capitalize Luca
Change are --> is
Change too --> to
Provide 3 transition word examples
Additionally, In conclusion, Therefore, Furthermore, To begin with, First, Finally...
Fragment
Turning point of a story
Climax
Full name of this middle school
Lois S. Hornsby