Fix this sentence!
To participate in a triathlon, you must be able to run swim and bike.
To participate in a triathlon, you must be able to run, swim, and bike.
What other words do we need to combine two independent clauses with a comma?
FANBOYS For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So
What makes a dependent clause different from an independent clause?
A dependent clause doesn't have a complete thought.
Fix this sentence!
Having completed all of the arrangements she sat down and waited for her guests to arrive.
Having completed all of the arrangements, she sat down and waited for her guests to arrive.
After the sale, the Red Sox endured one of the longest championship droughts, without winning a championship, in baseball history.
A. NO CHANGE
B. droughts, in which they were not winners, in
C. droughts, by failing to win a championship, in
D. droughts in
D. droughts in
Fix that sentence!
Ate all of the jellybeans except for the popcorn-flavored ones.
I ate all of the jellybeans except for the popcorn-flavored ones.
Fix this sentence!
We warned them of the icy road so they waited for the weather to warm up.
We warned them of the icy road, so they waited for the weather to warm up.
It was there that he truly found his voice as a writer, waking before dawn each day to record his thoughtful introspections of life before his wife and four children would awake.
A. NO CHANGE
B. thoughts
C. thoughtful ideas about life
D. introspection of life's ideas
B. thoughts
Fix that sentence! The jury members deliberated for days they simply couldn't agree.
A. NO CHANGE
B. days, they simply couldn't agree.
C. days they; simply couldn't agree.
D. days, for they simply couldn't agree.
D. days, for they simply couldn't agree.
Fix that sentence!
Jules, gave us his word, in an honest pledge of loyalty even though he didn't know us very well.
Jules gave us his word in an honest pledge of loyalty, even though he didn't know us very well.
As I grabbed my backpack from the rusty motorboat (which could have been form the 1970s), my feet sank into the warm mud of the island.
A. NO CHANGE
B. (which was likely built in the 1970s)
C. (which had peeling paint and some leaks)
D. OMIT the underlined portion
D. OMIT the underlined portion
Fix that sentence! Covered in mold, Karen found a rotten tomato in her purse.
A. NO CHANGE
B. Covered in mold, Karen's purse held a rotten tomato.
C. Karen, covered in mold, found a rotten tomato.
D. In her purse, Karen found a rotten tomato covered in mold.
D. In her purse, Karen found a rotten tomato covered in mold.