Commas
Daisy Tomiko Keiko and Nina live near the college they all attend.
Daisy, Tomiko, Keiko, and Nina live near the college they all attend OR Daisy, Tomiko, Keiko and Nina live near the college they all attend.
Finally they agreed on a menu.
Finally, they agreed on a menu.
After dinner Daisy served the dessert.
After dinner, Daisy served the dessert.
Tomiko and Keiko are from Japan, and Nina and Daisy are from Mexico.
They served Japanese tempura Mexican arroz con pollo Chinese stir-fried vegetables and American ice cream.
They served Japanese tempura, Mexican arroz con pollo, Chinese stir-fried vegetables, and American ice cream OR They served Japanese tempura, Mexican arroz con pollo, Chinese stir-fried vegetables and American ice cream.
Nina wanted to cook Mexican food but Keiko wanted to have Japanese food.
Nina wanted to cook Mexican food, but Keiko wanted to have Japanese food.
Nina and Keiko have the same birthday. Both girls were born on June 3 on different continents.
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First Nina made the rice.
First, Nina made the rice.
After that Tomiko prepared the vegetables.
After that, Tomiko prepared the vegetables.
Last week the girls decided to have a joint birthday party so they invited several friends for dinner.
Last week, the girls decided to have a joint birthday party, so they invited several friends for dinner.
Then Keiko cooked the tempura.
The guests could choose chocolate ice cream or vanilla ice cream with chocolate saurce.
No Change.