Is this a run on?
I love to write essays I would write one every day if I had the time.
Yes
Sentence 1: I love to write essays.
Sentence 2: I would write one every day if I had the time.
Your eyes saw the sun slowly rise in the sky, casting a warm golden glow over the land.
Second
The slender snake slithered through the tall grasses.
Noun: Snake
Adjective: Slender
Verb: Slithered
The artist preferred to paint using normal paint he did not like water colors.
The artist preferred to paint using normal paint ; he did not like water colors.
I went to the store and buyed a new shirt.
I went to the store and bought a new shirt.
The man ran away afraid, the dog chased him away. But
No
Jessica walked into the classroom, looking around nervously for a familiar face.
Second person
The massive elephant walked slowly across the open plain, its long trunk reaching out to grab a mouthful of grass to eat.
Adj- Massive
Noun- Elephant
Verb- Strolled
My sister who is a doctor just got married last weekend.
My sister, who is a doctor, just got married last weekend.
The horse galloped and ran through the field.
No
The horse galloped through the field, and ran.
The musician bowed the crowd grew louder.
Yes
The musician bowed. The crowd grew louder.
The cat pounced on the toy, swatting at it with its paws and biting it with its tiny teeth.
Third person
The small bird perched on the tree, its tiny wings fluttering as it looked out at the cat.
Noun- Bird
Verb-Fluttered
Adjective- Small
My favorite movies are The Shawshank Redemption Jurassic Park A Man called Otto and Titanic.
My favorite movies are The Shawshank Redemption, Jurassic Park, A man called Otto, and Titanic.
The cat slept peacefully on the windowsill, basking in the warm sunlight.
Yes it’s correct.
The dog ran across the road without looking both ways almost getting hit by a car because he was so excited to see his owner standing on the other side.
Yes
Sentence 1:The dog ran across the road without looking both ways.
Sentence 2: Almost getting hit by a car because he was so excited to see his owner standing on the other side.
I sat on the couch, feeling comfortable and relaxed because I was tired.
First person
The cute puppy played happily in the backyard, barking with joy and running in circles.
Nouns: dog and backyard
Adj: Cute
Verb: Played and running
I enjoyed watching the new movie it was a great way to spend my evening.
I enjoyed watching the new movie; it was a great way to spend my evening.
The flower bloomed in the springtime, its bright colors painting a beautiful picture on the landscape.
Yes it’s correct
A young girl and her dog went for a hike in the dense forest, marveling at the beauty of the colorful wildflowers and the birds singing in the trees, they stumbled upon a hidden waterfall, the water flowing swiftly and majestically down the slope into a pool, and they both took a refreshing dip in the cool water before continuing on their hike
Yes
Sentence 1:A young girl and her dog went for a hike in the dense forest.
Sentence 2:marveling at the beauty of the colorful wildflowers and the birds singing in the trees.
Sentence 3:They stumbled upon a hidden waterfall, the water flowing swiftly and majestically down the slope into a pool
Sentence 4:They both took a refreshing dip in the cool water before continuing on their hike
Me and my brother went on a road trip it was quite an experience! We drove for hours on end through the countryside, stopping to camp out in the woods.
First person
The beauiful swan glided gracefully across the still waters of the lake, its long neck curved elegantly, its white feathers ruffling.
Noun: Swan and lake
Verb : Glided and ruffling
Adj: Beautiful and elegant
I have always been interested in exploring different cultures I have traveled to many countries around the world to experience their traditions and customs firsthand.
I have always been interested in exploring different cultures; I have traveled to many countries around the world to experience their traditions and customs firsthand.
In the springtime when the flowers are in bloom the birds arrive back to the area to find food and to build their nests.
No
Correct sentence: During the springtime, when the flowers begin to bloom, birds arrive in the area to find food and build their nests.