REVISION
I was uncomfortable in small spaces, and afraid that we might get lost.
This change should be made to correctly revise the sentence.
Every chef and gourmet cook (know, knows) that the appropriate kitchen implements make food preparation easier.
What is chef and cook knows?
What is rhetoric?
I like to eat fish ___________ it isn't too heavy on my stomach.
What is because?
This is the phrase without parallel structure.
What is talking crazy to girls?
Ordering and selling cookies helps girls get better in important ways.
This is the BEST replacement for the italicized phrase
mature / improve / prepare / think
Preparation and service often (depends, depend) upon having the correct utensils close at hand.
What is Preparation and service depend?
This rhetorical device involves the deliberate exaggeration of a situation. ex: He ate everything in the house.
What is hyperbole?
Find the cause and effect term.
I ate plenty of cookies yesterday. Also, I ate sandwiches. Consequently, I had a major stomach ache.
I will invite my dance teacher, my best friend, and my favorite coach.
What are dance teacher, best friend, favorite coach?
Professor Borglum glared at Reggie, __________ spent the entire class drawing space aliens in the margins of the lecture outline.
Who or Whom
Curry's statistics (justifies/justify) his fans' reaction.
What is justify?
This rhetorical device involves the deliberate exaggeration of a situation. ex: He ate everything in the house.
What is hyperbole?
This time word means that something hasn't happened yet.. but it will in a matter of time?
What is eventually?
"Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet all hardships, support any friend, oppose any foe to assure the survival and the success of liberty." -John F. Kennedy
This change makes the quote parallel.
What is meet any hardship?
Buy your own pens! You cannot borrow ours.
A. Ours does not need an apostrophe.
B. Ours should have an apostrophe between the r and s: our’s.
C. Ours should have an apostrophe after the s: ours’.
What A. Ours does not need an apostrophe.
Binoculars (help, helps) fans see this brilliant athlete close up as he passes and shoots.
What is help?
The three main types of appeals (The Greek Please)
What are ethos, logos, and pathos?
What is the contrast term?
I am different from my sister because she is tall and I am short. We like the same foods though. Despite our differences, we are the best of friends.
What is Despite?
Students capped their pens, were closing their notebooks, and zipped their book bags as they tried to alert Professor Jones, rambling at the lectern, that the end of class had arrived.
This change gives the sentence parallel structure.
What is closed their notebooks?
The slimy smelly lettuce on my burrito made me ask the manager to return my 99 cents.
A. Should you add a comma after slimy?
B. Or should you add a comma after burrito?
The research by these two physicists (was, were) able to disprove a universally accepted law of nature.
What is was?
A work that targets human vices and follies or social institutions and conventions for reform or ridicule such as "A Modest Proposal," Family Guy, or the Boondocks.
What is satire?
What is paragraph?
All students are expected to do their homework good, quickly and efficient.
This corrects parallel structure using adverbs
What is well, quickly, and efficiently?