Comparison
Of all the dogs at the obedience school, the beagle belonging to Jose and her was the more well behaved dog.
CORRECTED: Of all the dogs at the obedience school, the beagle belonging to Jose and her was the most well behaved dog.
One of my best friends are an extra on Grey's Anatomy this week.
What is change are to is?
Because it requires a lot of skill and determination.
Fragment
What change, if any?
Mary have no idea what to wear to the dance.
What is change "have" to "has"
"She is as cool as a cucumber."
What is a simile.
Of the three turtles she and Nathan have, Boxer is the more active.
CORRECTED: Of the three turtles she and Nathan have, Boxer is the most active.
Not only the students, but also their teacher have been called to the principal's office.
What is change have to has?
Water can be found in the earth's surface and it can be found under the earth's surface.
Run-On
What change, if any?
All of those long hours of practise finally paid off!
All of those long hours of practice finally paid off!
"The tree branches danced in the wind."
What is personification.
The twin toddlers behaved most agreeably after their naps.
CORRECTED: The twin toddlers behaved more agreeably after their naps.
Six gallons of milk is still in the refrigerator.
What is change is to are?
If you want to become famous.
Fragment
What change, if any?
"That's great! Stephen did not allow any goals to be scored in tonight's game" said Coach Pringle.
"That's great! Stephen did not allow any goals to be scored in tonight's game," said Coach Pringle.
The main idea or point of a story.
What is theme?
Of the two plans, Hayden's plan was the most effective plan.
CORRECTED: Of the two plans, Hayden's plan was the more effective pan.
There was 15 candles in that bag.
What is change was to were?
Being a straight-A student is great, but understanding the material is more important.
Complete Sentence
What change, if any?
I thought I would need antibiotics but the doctor said Youre fine
I thought I would need antibiotics, but the doctor said "You're fine".
"You are the sun, moon, and stars to me."
What is a metaphor.
Of all the girls in my class, I like Sarah more.
CORRECTED: Of all the girls in my class, I like Sarah most.
There was several problems with the theory.
What is change was to were?
When it rains, the rain forms runoff, the abundance of rain causes some areas to flood.
Run-On
What change, if any?
We plan to go to the pet store, get a dog, and bring her home.
No change
"There were a million people in line in front of me to see the new Avengers movie."
What is a hyperbole.