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Justify the author's decision to revise point of view in the second excerpt.
Original Excerpt:
One can learn a lot about a person from a quick glance in his closet. In Greg's, a viewer would find no clothes, but shelves filled with motors, wires, batteries, and hand tools. He's always enjoyed building things.
Revised Excerpt:
You can learn a lot about me from a quick glance in my closet. You’ll find no clothes, but shelves filled with motors, wires, batteries, and hand tools. I’ve always enjoyed building things.
(A) The point of view in the revised excerpt makes the essay more formal.
(B) The point of view in the revised excerpt makes the language of the essay more vivid.
(C) The point of view in the revised excerpt makes the essay more personal
(D) The point of view in the revised excerpt makes the language of the essay less specific.
C