Human Touch
Clear Point
Tone
Theme
Revise
100
A vivid story about a time you helped someone and developed your humanitarian goals
What is a topic that presents yourself well
100
Not taking forever to get to the point
What is an obvious point
100
Your personal touch that makes the paper unique from others
What is Voice
100
The whole point the paper is being written and why
What is your moral
100
When you do not look over your paper
What is not revising
200
Telling about the busy career and sports schedule you balanced along with class courses.
What is explaining who you are outside of school
200
Knowing exactly what you are talking about and having effective body paragraphs
What is have a clear goal in mind
200
When you allow multiple sources to read your peice and create changes that take away voice
What is overeditting
200
Allowing the reader to know exactly what your paper is trying to accomplish
What is having a clear goal
200
your paper before revision
What is first draft
300
A depiction of who you are and what has influenced you in life with clear vision of how you aquired your goals
What is describing your motivation
300
Loosing to point of the essay by talking about things that dont relate well to the goal in mind
What is straying from topic
300
Not changeing how your peice is written as you go along because it changes the voice
What is loosing your voice
300
When you use a theme that is close to yourself you do this
What is showing who you are
300
A paper that is well written and well revised
What is your final draft
400
Writing from life experiences that are unique to yourself so your story is unique from others
What is the human factor
400
When you create a point that answers the essay question well
What is developing a good point
400
A theme that has no backup from second sources or stories
What is an underdeveloped theme
400
Must be avoided unless risking loss of voice and unnatural paragraphs
What is overedditing
500
When you write from your own skills and don't allow that to be over processed
What is not being cookie cutter
500
Having a good Introduction, body, and conclusion that stay on task
What is Good development
500
The strongest human bond most easily understood through words and esiest to potray personal values
What is commanionship
500
A theme that avoids a point or fails to answer the essay questions
What is pointless theme
500
An essay with no flow and no attempt to fix this
What is a being lazy
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