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Read the passage below and replace all the Dead and Tired words with vivid and action words. (Hint: There are 7!)
I will never forget my 9th birthday. I learned just how much my mom and my friends like me. This experience changed me because it made me feel good and nice about myself. Next time the only thing I would change would be spending a little more time playing football. I was so sad that my birthday had to end. It truly was the best birthday I have ever had. I had lots of fun.
I will never forget my 9th birthday. I learned just how much my mom and my friends adore me. This experience changed me because it made me feel spectacular and wonderful about myself. Next time the only thing I would change would be spending a wee bit more time playing football. I was so distressed that my birthday to conclude. It truly was the most fantastic birthday I have ever had. I had boundless fun.