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Both of the hotels are strategic locations
Both of the hotels are in strategic locations
I had a really great time. I met my brother and had fun spending time with my family
I had a really great time. I met up with my brother and had fun spending time with my family
During the day we walk around, and saw some famous buildings like the Petronas Twin Towers.
During the day we walked around, and saw some famous buildings like the Petronas Twin Towers.
Unfortunately, when we get there the weather isn’t good enough.
Unfortunately, when we got there the weather wasn’t good enough.
I went to the USA for 2 week.
I went to the USA for 2 weeks.
During the day, we travelled around the city by the subway.
During the day, we travelled around the city on the subway.
We had a great time in Jojga. The citizens were very kind.
We had a great time in Jojga. The local people were very kind.
We visited some shops that sells a lot of cute stuff.
We visited some shops that sold a lot of cute stuff.
We only had a simple problem, which is our health, because we all are very tired.
We only had a simple problem, which was our health, because we all were very tired.
The place wasn’t that crowd but it was nice.
The place wasn’t that crowded but it was nice.
Last May, exactly on May 6th – 10th, I went to Bali, Indonesia with my friends.
Last May, exactly from May 6th – 10th, I went to Bali, Indonesia with my friends.
We had a very great time there.
We had a great time there.
It was my first time went to a different country with a friend
It was my first time going to a different country with a friend
After the competition finish, we went to Malioboro to bought food and souvenirs
After the competition finished, we went to Malioboro to buy food and souvenirs.
We stopped at every stalls to try new snacks
We stopped at every stall to try new snacks
I went to Australia last May. We flew there by Singapore Airlines.
I went to Australia last May. We flew there on Singapore Airlines.
On the first day, we went to Sentosa Island to put our things
On the first day, we went to Sentosa Island to put our things in our hotel room
We were staying at Eden Residence, near Canggu.
We stayed at Eden Residence, near Canggu.
After we play and won, we ate together. There I bought nothing.
After we played and won, we ate together. I didn’t buy anything there.
I went to USA with my family on June 5th.
I went to the USA with my family on June 5th.
During lunch and dinner, we usually went to Pavillion and ate there.
For lunch and dinner, we usually went to Pavillion and ate there.
We took a lot of photos in Tokyo because there are lots of cute places with a great view for taking pictures
We took a lot of photos in Tokyo because there are lots of cute places that are great for taking pictures
We bought a lot of food that will be given to our family and friends.
We bought a lot of food to give to our family and friends.
]**Four errors:] It was so cool, there was around 12 people who were living at the villa, and all of it was my friends.
It was so cool, there were around 12 people who stayed at the villa, and all of them were my friends.
The location of the hotel is nearby many stalls, restaurants, shopping center, etc.
The location of the hotel is nearby many stalls, restaurants, shopping centers, etc.