Verbs
At the beginning of the term, English grammar was seeming too difficult to learn.
At the beginning of the term, English grammar seemed too difficult to learn.
She didn’t like the food, however, she didn’t want to insult her friend’s mother.
She didn’t like the food. However, she didn’t want to insult her friend’s mother.
She didn’t like the food; however, she didn’t want to insult her friend’s mother.
Because she always wanted to visit San Francisco. She will go there for the break.
Because she always wanted to visit San Francisco, she will go there for the break.
The student, whom I met at the open model sessions, is an illustration major, like me.
The student whom I met at the open model sessions is an illustration major, like me.
Students must have the motivate to learn; teachers can't provide that.
Students must have the motivation to learn; teachers can't provide that.
The package was on the porch when I was getting home.
The package was on the porch when I got home.
In addition to being a student, he works at Jen Library 20 hours a week, and he still has a lot of free time.
In addition to being a student, he works at Jen Library 20 hours a week, but/yet he still has a lot of free time.
One of my favorite foods is pork dumplings, we eat them every Spring Festival, they are delicious.
One of my favorite foods is pork dumplings. We eat them every Spring Festival; they are delicious.
One of my favorite foods is pork dumplings; we eat them every Spring Festival. They are delicious.
A student said the Noodle Bowl, that is on the southside of Savannah, has the best hot pot.
A student said the Noodle Bowl, which is on the southside of Savannah, has the best hot pot.
He misses the tradition customs of the Chinese New Year festival
He misses the traditional customs of the Chinese New Year festival.
He has played the piano when he was a teenager, but now he plays the drums.
He played the piano when he was a teenager, but now he plays the drums.
Although I spent a lot of time on my painting, but I am still not happy with it.
Although I spent a lot of time on my painting, I am still not happy with it.
I spent a lot of time on my painting, but I am still not happy with it.
I went to Tybee; is a very nice beach.
I went to Tybee; it is a very nice beach.
I went to Tybee. It is a very nice beach.
Her boyfriend who is going to LA for the break has a surprise for her when he returns.
Her boyfriend, who is going to LA for the break, has a surprise for her when he returns.
People often choose friends who are similarity to them.
People often choose friends who are similar to them.
Her sister is living on her own in the U.S. for four years.
Her sister lived/has lived on her own in the U.S. for four years.
Mai likes reading, gardening, and to paint watercolor landscapes in her spare time.
Mai likes reading, gardening, and painting watercolor landscapes in her spare time.
She wanted to go to college in the United States, because she wanted to learn about another culture.
She wanted to go to college in the United States because she wanted to learn about another culture.
The book which he gave it to me as a present is really fascinating; I love the illustrations.
The book which he gave to me as a present is really fascinating; I love the illustrations.
You must work hard in order to be success.
You must work hard in order to be successful. (preferable)
You must work hard in order to be a success.
Architecture students have presented already their projects; interior design students will present next.
Architecture students have already presented their projects; interior design students will present next.
Writing is OK. Although I prefer to draw and paint.
Writing is OK although I prefer to draw and paint.
Writing is OK. However, I prefer to draw and paint.
When this term is almost over.
This term is almost over. !!!
Let's meet for dinner at Flying Monk, where is my favorite restaurant.
Let's meet for dinner at Flying Monk, which is my favorite restaurant.
There were many boring people waiting outside the theatre for hours.
There were many bored people waiting outside the theatre for hours.