Purpose, Focus, and Organization
What kind of essay is this and what does it mean? Write an expository essay in which you explain the benefits of sports.
expository, which means that I am providing information (explaining).
What is the proof or support you get from the text to back up your opinion or controlling idea?
evidence
Fix the errors in this sentence: Physicians will tell there patients too exercise daily.
Physicians will tell their patients to exercise daily.
How should you start the introduction paragraph?
with a grabber to grab the readers attention.
What is a claim?
Your opinion or perspective on a topic.
What do ALL essays have to have?
What is an introduction paragraph (that introduces the topic and sets up the organization of the essay), body paragraphs (that elaborate and explain ideas), a conclusion paragraph (restates main points and leaves an impact on the reader).
How is evidence different from elaboration?
evidence is pulled from the text. Elaboration is when you take the evidence and apply it in some way. It is also using creative ways to do it.
Fix the errors in this sentence: Wearing a uniform dosent stop a students creativity it encourages.
Wearing a uniform doesn't stop a student's creativity, it encourages.
What should be included in your introduction?
central idea or claim + your main points and a link
What should you do the night before a big test?
try to go to bed on time and get good rest.
What kind of essay is this and what does that mean? Write an argumentative essay in which you explain if students should be required to wear uniforms to school.
argumentative and it means that I have to take a side about whether students should have to wear uniforms or not.
What is an evidence starter, what are some examples, and where should it be?
Evidence starters are telling the reader where you got your text evidence. You can use, "According to," "In the sources," you can give the author, paragraph number or the title of the article. It needs to be right before or right after the evidence.
Fix the errors in this sentence: Principal's belive that uniforms prevent student's from being distracted
Principals believe that uniforms prevent students from being distracted.
How should you start each of your body paragraphs?
with a transition and main points.
What are all of the things that you need to do before you can make a plan?
Read the ENTIRE prompt and pick out key words and phrases to make sure you understand the topic. Then you need to actually read the sources and gather evidence and ideas. Then use the strongest evidence in your essay.
What is the best way to decide which side to take on an argumentative essay?
What is the side that has more text evidence to support the main points
What do you need to do with your text evidence to show the reader that you understood it?
explain and elaborate on it.
What is wrong with this sentence? Children often report after exercising that their feeling better.
Children often report, after exercising, that they're feeling better.
What all should be included in each body paragraph?
a transition to the main point of that body graph, text evidence supporting that idea, a clear, well-developed elaboration of the idea, and a link back to the main point.
What should you include in your planner?
The claim or central idea, the main points in the body paragraphs, what evidence can be used to support them, and what you will use for elaboration.
What must you have in your essay to clue the reader in on what your essay is going to be about? Where should it be located?
central idea or claim and it should be your introduction/conclusion paragraphs, and throughout your essay as you write your main points.
Where does your evidence come from and how do you find it?
From the sources. It needs to match your claim or central idea.
Fix the errors in this sentence: Have you ever wondered why adults tell you that to much t.v. is bad for you. The florida department of health says being a couch potato leds to obesity.
Have you ever wondered why adults tell you that too much T.V. is bad for you? The Florida Department of Health says, being a couch potato leads to obesity.
What should be included in your conclusion paragraph?
Transition, a restated central idea or claim, the main point in the body paragraphs, and leave the reader with something to think about or a call to action (zinger).
How much time should you spend wiring the essay? Why should you give yourself this much time?
At least an hour. To make sure you carefully explain all of your reasons and elaborate on all the text evidence used.