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We go to Fairview Miss Jewell elementary.
change elementary to Elementary
Tom is going to the store, and running to the school.
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The star bellys all went to the other side of the beach.
change bellys to bellies
My brother was born in Atlanta Georgia.
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He was going over they're to eat the cake.
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Henry went to the Park and walked his dog.
change Park to park
Thor is eating his food but he decided to chase the cat.
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There are several churchees in town that will host a dinners for the poor in our town this Christmas.
change churchees to churche
When I went to the store I picked up the milk, bread, four packs of gum cheese, and apples.
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It's going to be a nice day when we get to Disney World.
make no change.
"the hunger games" was an awesome movie!
change "the hunger games" to "The Hunger Games"
One day we will go home, and we will get to eat lots of pizza at our home.
repeated information, not correct
We asked ourselfes if we were good enough to get extra recess.
change ourselfes to ourselves
My sister was born November, 22 1982.
My sister was born November 22, 1982.
He is sure your going to win the Christmas tree decoration contest.
change your to you're
cara, michael, daisy, and bobby worked on their project about the civil war.
change to Cara, Michael, Daisy, and Bobby worked on their project about the Civil War.
He is going to work. He will get off at 8 o'clock.
He is going to work and gets off at 8 o'clock.
The cat almost got ran over. He really has nine lifes.
changes lifes to lives
Although the dog ran after the cat he failed to catch her.
place a comma after cat.
There mom is making them cookies to bring to the class party.
we moved from jacksonville, north carolina to paris, texas when i was a baby.
change to: We moved from Jacksonville, North Carolina to Paris, Texas when I was a baby.
Dumbo the flying elephant used a feather to fly and he amazed the crowd.
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When we went to the zoo we saw three monkies swinging from the tree branches in the enclosure.
" I am getting a nice pair of earring for Christmas" mom said.
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There are several people who go skiing in Colorado for vacation. They really they're time when they don't fall down.
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