Editing 1
After we saw the movie we went to the café and discussed it.
After we saw the movie, we went to the café and discussed it.
Luis runned for student body president.
Luis ran for student body president.
Will you come to the party we think you’ll have fun.
Will you come to the party? We think you’ll have fun.
I wanted to buy a bicycle. My paycheck wasn’t enough.
I wanted to buy a bicycle but my paycheck wasn’t enough
Each and every student deserves a fair and equal chance to try out for sports.
Every student deserves a fair chance to try out for sports.
Unless you know how to drive a manual
transmission car buy an automatic.
Unless you know how to drive a manual
transmission car, buy an automatic.
Luis to Puerto Rico rather frequently.
Luis [goes] to Puerto Rico rather frequently.
We spent a year traveling in Asia, consequently, we speak some Chinese.
We spent a year traveling in Asia; consequently, we speak some Chinese
I made the bed my room passed inspection.
I made the bed, so my room passed inspection.
At an earlier time today, my sister told me she would pick me up after the end of work.
Earlier today, my sister told me she would pick me up after work
Because dock workers had no contract they discussed going on strike.
Because dock workers had no contract, they discussed going on strike.
Luis putting too much syrup on his pancakes.
[He/Dad/I] put too much syrup on his pancakes.
The Avinas live on Old Germantown Road, they’ve lived there for thirty years.
The Avinas live on Old Germantown Road. They’ve lived there for thirty years
The Avinas live on Old Germantown Road, and they’ve lived there for thirty years.
I wore my new shoes I got blisters
I wore my new shoes, and I got blisters.
Combine the sentences:
The garden is overgrown. The garden is at the back of the house.
The garden at the back of the house is overgrown.
Since, we had eaten a big breakfast we just snacked, the rest of the day.
Since we had eaten a big breakfast, we just snacked the rest of the day.
the new soccer team captains are chosen, Michael and Jose
Michael and Jose were/are chosen as the new soccer team captains.
I found it I get to keep it.
I found it, so I get to keep it.
I can’t have dessert until I eat my dinner.
No changes necessary.
Claire is such a good cook that she rarely follow recipes.
Claire is such a good cook that she rarely follows recipes.
After, the concert was over I bought a T-shirt of the band.
After the concert was over, I bought a T-shirt of the band.
The willis wildkats won their game on friday november 6.
The Willis Wildkats won their game on Friday, November 6.
Powdered fruit drinks taste good nevertheless they are not as nutritious as juice.
Powdered fruit drinks taste good; nevertheless, they are not as nutritious as juice.
You can fix my broken alarm clock you can buy me a new one
You can fix my broken alarm clock or you can buy me a new one
Combine the sentences:
Ace Green is a big donor to the public radio station. Ace Green is a local businessman.
Ace Green, a local businessman, is a big donor to the public radio station